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the poet
finesse the sorrow
make it sing
little melancholy notes
to be freed on the winds
where they are carried--
to the heart of the poet
who knows this music
silently we sway to its melody
stoically we carry the pain
shoulder to shoulder
united in understanding
the pool of thought always open
with each poet the climate of the water changes
we feel one another's energies so completely
our souls kiss becoming one for a moment
then taken to the world the circle completed
the poet has fulfilled his mission
with a word, a thought
with the very essence of his spirit
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Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 4:26am
Life has kept me away for a while, but I'm so glad I popped in and read this exquisite love song. Thank you for sharing your beautiful soul. You've enriched my night.
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Re: Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 4:33am
thank you graciously beautiful poetess you gifted me smiles... enjoy your evening...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 4:44am
thank you dearest Ethan for the love here yes I find myself in a peaceful state I deeply appreciate you caring...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 5:04am
My God Brenda!! This is absolutely beautiful. I will not only RL this one but i will visit it often. This place is special. That's for sure! You couldn't have penned that with any more elegance and grace. A breathtaking sentiment to your fellow poets.. I found myself wanting to sway to that music. Just lovely.
-Minxy❣
-Minxy❣
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Re: Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 5:53am
thank you graciously beautiful Minx I'm so happy this write moved you so deeply...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
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24th Sep 2019 5:53am
Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 5:14am
Re: Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 5:54am
thank you graciously dearest poet for the love on this write... it's deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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3rd Oct 2019 4:14am
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3rd Oct 2019 4:17am
Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 8:27pm
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3rd Oct 2019 4:18am
Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 8:35pm
Lovely, with terrific flow and imagery. You are truly a poetess, paying homage to the art sugah.
If you'd like some helpful tips on technique and construction, delivered with warmth and positivity, check out the group, Cafe Critique. Nice amount of feedback from the directors.
If you'd like some helpful tips on technique and construction, delivered with warmth and positivity, check out the group, Cafe Critique. Nice amount of feedback from the directors.
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Re: Re. the poet
3rd Oct 2019 4:19am
thank you graciously dearest Daniel forgive my tardy reply I haven't been myself... I will check the group out I appreciate the heads up...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. the poet
3rd Oct 2019 4:08pm
Re. the poet
24th Sep 2019 9:02pm
oh Brenda this is an absolutely gorgeous train of thought so delicately written
xo
xo
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3rd Oct 2019 4:20am
Re. the poet
25th Sep 2019 00:53am
Wow this is breathtaking Brenda
Absolutely beautiful piece🙌👏
The ending especially blew me away
"the pool of thought always open
with each poet the climate of the water changes
we feel one another's energies so completely
our souls kiss becoming one for a moment
then taken to the world the circle completed
the poet has fulfilled his mission
with a word, a thought
with the very essence of his spirit "
Wow again you're a beautiful soul with such a gift👏🙌🙌
Absolutely beautiful piece🙌👏
The ending especially blew me away
"the pool of thought always open
with each poet the climate of the water changes
we feel one another's energies so completely
our souls kiss becoming one for a moment
then taken to the world the circle completed
the poet has fulfilled his mission
with a word, a thought
with the very essence of his spirit "
Wow again you're a beautiful soul with such a gift👏🙌🙌
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Re: Re. the poet
3rd Oct 2019 4:26am
aw thank you graciously dearest Hunter I feel a special connection with you and your writes...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. the poet
3rd Oct 2019 4:26am
Re. the poet
26th Sep 2019 4:18am
Dear B,
What a lovely homage! While reading this my mind’s eye conjured a sea of writer’s with wistful smiles knowing they were arbiters of insight and wisdom lifting up others on their way.
Beautiful write! H🌷
What a lovely homage! While reading this my mind’s eye conjured a sea of writer’s with wistful smiles knowing they were arbiters of insight and wisdom lifting up others on their way.
Beautiful write! H🌷
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Re: Re. the poet
3rd Oct 2019 4:27am
thank you graciously beautiful Honoria I always smile when I see you on my page you leave the most beautifully thoughtful comments... you lift us up too...
I cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
I cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the poet
28th Sep 2019 4:20am
Damn, this is as beautiful as you are. ❤
I've set some goals myself to create more poetry vs prose, and incorporate the melancholy & ugly I "hate" to spill. I can always carry something away from your flow of emotions & i do envy the feelings you poets portray. This adds promise...shit needs to start getting real.;)
Love you with a hug sent your way.❣🙏
I've set some goals myself to create more poetry vs prose, and incorporate the melancholy & ugly I "hate" to spill. I can always carry something away from your flow of emotions & i do envy the feelings you poets portray. This adds promise...shit needs to start getting real.;)
Love you with a hug sent your way.❣🙏
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Re: Re. the poet
3rd Oct 2019 4:13am
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora I just read your latest and it looks like you are doing beautifully... be free to be yourself lovely one I think you did fantastic at getting real...
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕