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in-completely yours
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for you. what i ever read n feel is you my love, Rob. you know xx
*originally intended for admin's comp, Visual Poetry #reading.not submitted though
*originally intended for admin's comp, Visual Poetry #reading.not submitted though
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Re. in-completely yours
20th Sep 2019 10:55am
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27th Sep 2019 3:51pm
Soul Dear Poet...how absolutely ecstatic to see you in my pages ..glad it resonated with you..hope to see you more in du with your Classic Scribes. gratitudes x:)
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Anonymous
20th Sep 2019 11:13am
"The butterfly counts not months but moments, and has time enough." ~Rabindranath Tagore
This is very special & treads softly over our nursed hearts. Carries its own eroticism towards libraries being erected by lovers. Love owl-monkey. Nights linger. xx
This is very special & treads softly over our nursed hearts. Carries its own eroticism towards libraries being erected by lovers. Love owl-monkey. Nights linger. xx
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Re: Re. in-completely yours
27th Sep 2019 3:55pm
Ahh the Nobel Tagore you quoted...thanks my Ultimate Poet my Love...wanted to keep it simple yet intense..capture the peaks you know..you say it all my peacockish penguin, btw the bonobos & their bananas are never exhausted, never ever in the evolutionary decline ;)
Re. in-completely yours
20th Sep 2019 11:32am
I really hate you missed the deadline on this one! I feel it would've been a winner for certain!
Beautiful offering, Uma. xo
Beautiful offering, Uma. xo
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at the end of the day, comp. are just comp. Dear Wise One.
ah feels like one of to-be the comp. title of Dada Danny the adored Wise Poet:) comp. are good prompts frankly...but always believe one expresses what one expresses or the need to be...whatever be the comp. or space or time. juz me Ahavati. Gratitudes :) xx
ah feels like one of to-be the comp. title of Dada Danny the adored Wise Poet:) comp. are good prompts frankly...but always believe one expresses what one expresses or the need to be...whatever be the comp. or space or time. juz me Ahavati. Gratitudes :) xx
Re: Re. in-completely yours
27th Sep 2019 4:09pm
I know they're just comps - but the winners are marketed - and this would've been a lovely reflection on DU. There's always next month! <3
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Re. in-completely yours
20th Sep 2019 12:52pm
^^^^^^^^
what the lady rumi above said.
oh, the nuances ov this, ov you... condens'd, press's thru this sieve ov brevity ... completely undilut'd beauty.
you are a treasure, uma
xo
what the lady rumi above said.
oh, the nuances ov this, ov you... condens'd, press's thru this sieve ov brevity ... completely undilut'd beauty.
you are a treasure, uma
xo
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Re: Re. in-completely yours
27th Sep 2019 4:05pm
& you are a smooth poetic magic, shadoe! your words slide in
easy..yet to stay say strong & deep. thank you K for a lovely visit
& comment :) xx
easy..yet to stay say strong & deep. thank you K for a lovely visit
& comment :) xx
Re. in-completely yours
20th Sep 2019 1:24pm
A torrent of understated sensuality. Hats off to this write Uma.
100 hugs,
buddhakitty
100 hugs,
buddhakitty
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Re: Re. in-completely yours
27th Sep 2019 4:08pm
your wise eyes grasp the kinetics & potentials
of the verses in an amazing fast & pithy way...
just like your each poem, dear bk ..Love your
visits & words, thanks :) xx
of the verses in an amazing fast & pithy way...
just like your each poem, dear bk ..Love your
visits & words, thanks :) xx
Re. in-completely yours
20th Sep 2019 2:42pm
The word choices and how you bend and manipulate the sounds is just mind blowing dear Uma, dammit every time i read one of your works i feel i need to just retire my pen, this THIS, WHAT YOU DO is truly art.
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27th Sep 2019 4:14pm
Layla, Aw You You My Foremost Poet Adored Loved Ever Ever..when you say these words ..gets me in a mesmerize..only helps me to strive better
to be at least a pint of what shining poetess of a natural flair you are...
Totally adoring & gratitudes that you are with me in Heart & Soul in the warmth of Life in Love in Art in Poetry , my friend my Dear One ...how amazing that we share our heartsouling adoring depths now..Light & Love my One..Keep shining & hoping to read ev the masterpieces you art xx:)
to be at least a pint of what shining poetess of a natural flair you are...
Totally adoring & gratitudes that you are with me in Heart & Soul in the warmth of Life in Love in Art in Poetry , my friend my Dear One ...how amazing that we share our heartsouling adoring depths now..Light & Love my One..Keep shining & hoping to read ev the masterpieces you art xx:)
Re. in-completely yours
22nd Sep 2019 11:31pm
I have put this incredible piece of Love right at the top of your wonderful work uma.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. in-completely yours
27th Sep 2019 4:21pm
To hear this from you, my greatly adored Poet, is a golden bell
in the ringing music.. truly inspiring to be more of endless more :)
Thank you Harry:)
in the ringing music.. truly inspiring to be more of endless more :)
Thank you Harry:)
Re. in-completely yours
26th Sep 2019 3:39am
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27th Sep 2019 4:25pm
again and again..
happens to be again & again:)
thank you dear Poet for a timeless spaceless eternity spelt out.
Yes 'UNi' verse tends to be Singularity. the Truth Ev.
happens to be again & again:)
thank you dear Poet for a timeless spaceless eternity spelt out.
Yes 'UNi' verse tends to be Singularity. the Truth Ev.
Re: Re. in-completely yours
28th Sep 2019 00:38am
Re. in-completely yours
13th Jan 2020 3:36am
Gorgeous poetry, uma... I loved the natural imagery... The magical fireflies, butterflies, moonmoths, fireflies, and silverfish were a wonderful touch... I thought the closing stanza was perfect as well... I loved your wonderful analogy ❤️😊
Keep up the great work... I love to read you!
Keep up the great work... I love to read you!
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