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at the dawn of my rebirth
♪for a bruised soldier rising♪
when my sky_ fell out from under me
i became one with The dark
when my boat tipped over in the sea
i wAs noah void of ark
i have navigated all my life
with the heavens as my guide
now the stars impale me like a knife
as the bLood seeps from my side
shall i ink the oceans with my stain
clutching at a fragile straw
shalL the sun not rise for me again
can’t the strife end in a draw
gone the birds’ wing-whispered melodies
gone the hymns that reverenced low
at the dancing of thE galaxies
how the world is silenced now!
let me melt into the netherworld
far beneath this crust of earth
for a new sky_ shall for me unfold
at the dawN of my rebirth…
© Copyright 2019 September 09
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
when my sky_ fell out from under me
i became one with The dark
when my boat tipped over in the sea
i wAs noah void of ark
i have navigated all my life
with the heavens as my guide
now the stars impale me like a knife
as the bLood seeps from my side
shall i ink the oceans with my stain
clutching at a fragile straw
shalL the sun not rise for me again
can’t the strife end in a draw
gone the birds’ wing-whispered melodies
gone the hymns that reverenced low
at the dancing of thE galaxies
how the world is silenced now!
let me melt into the netherworld
far beneath this crust of earth
for a new sky_ shall for me unfold
at the dawN of my rebirth…
© Copyright 2019 September 09
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 10th Sep 2019
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Super appreciate this spill
on my behalf
The graphics are super, as well, and if i could get a jpg of it i could go to a Print Center and have a poster made for me (Yes, i think it's that good!)
I downloaded a pdf and pretty certain this will do --
again, many thanx, Brother for the love
on my behalf
The graphics are super, as well, and if i could get a jpg of it i could go to a Print Center and have a poster made for me (Yes, i think it's that good!)
I downloaded a pdf and pretty certain this will do --
again, many thanx, Brother for the love
Thank you, my friend, Brother Tallen. Writing this in your behalf came easy because I know the kind of heart that resides in you and how it bleeds for others.
Hope you managed to get a good poster keepsake from the JPEG I have substituted on the site. And what an honour you do me for wanting to memorialise this on your walls!
What I hope most of all is that the words and thoughts will bring healing. You should probably share it in sky_ view and see whether the rain might not become sunshine!
My very best regards to you.
Sincerely
cab
Hope you managed to get a good poster keepsake from the JPEG I have substituted on the site. And what an honour you do me for wanting to memorialise this on your walls!
What I hope most of all is that the words and thoughts will bring healing. You should probably share it in sky_ view and see whether the rain might not become sunshine!
My very best regards to you.
Sincerely
cab
10th Sep 2019 9:30pm
15th Sep 2019 5:06am
You have a keen eye and a kind heart, Liam.
Yes, I deliberately wanted the poem to include the name without having to state it in a subtitle dedication.
Thank you for "sweetening the labour" wth your kind comment and RL inclusion.
Sincerely
cab
Yes, I deliberately wanted the poem to include the name without having to state it in a subtitle dedication.
Thank you for "sweetening the labour" wth your kind comment and RL inclusion.
Sincerely
cab
13th Sep 2019 1:36am
Amen, sir.
This may be my very own second coming.
Beautiful spill, Cab.. as per usual your words uplift and inspire me as a poetess.
Your friend,
LostGirl
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This may be my very own second coming.
Beautiful spill, Cab.. as per usual your words uplift and inspire me as a poetess.
Your friend,
LostGirl
4😘
Your honesty and sincerity are never short, LG; moreover, you use encouraging words to paint them. Thank you.
What you say about your "very own second coming" has caught my attention. Have you, too, walked in the valley of the shadow? Then this is a working beyond my mere lyrics: I've given my expressions to the Lord so that He might use them as He pleases.
I thank Him for using my ink in a pen that belongs to Him, in the first place. Thanks for the RL add.
Sincerely
cab
What you say about your "very own second coming" has caught my attention. Have you, too, walked in the valley of the shadow? Then this is a working beyond my mere lyrics: I've given my expressions to the Lord so that He might use them as He pleases.
I thank Him for using my ink in a pen that belongs to Him, in the first place. Thanks for the RL add.
Sincerely
cab
