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Dogs of War

Moments in life seem void of light
Cry out for help with all our might
Moments it seems we loose all sight
Like no way we will ever get it right
Even tending to our basic needs a fight

Life puts us in some moments by force
No sympathy or remorse
Drops us off leaves us to take course
All good is seeming gone and no source

I've held brothers and sisters shaking
Pain how their hearts were quaking
More evil seemed all we were making
Life came greedy hand still taking

Get back to the things in their world
Cant feel peace in the arms of their girl
Minds bent self destructive viscous twirl

Dont judge his hidden fear
You've not been there
They just need someone to care
A heart to understand as they share

It'll be this way til there are no more
My heart forever with the dogs of war
Written by Jiminex
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Author's Note
Criticize me the poems but leave the empty hearts alone
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