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What Is There To Write Poetry About
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What is there to write poetry about?
The endless monsoonal humidity,
The triple digit heat clear into night
That starts again before it’s time to eat.
It’s too damn hot to eat, you kiddin’ me,
What is there to write poetry about?
That I keep wipin’ down with alcohol,
That I can’t get more naked than I am.
There’s nothin’ sexy to me come the night.
A minute on the phone “I gotta go!”
What is there to write poetry about?
You said you’d call, I slept right thru it all
If I seem grumpy, I’m way overdue.
We used to have alotta time to spare,
But it’s so hot I miss your spoken verse.
What is there to write poetry about?
What is there to write poetry about?
The endless monsoonal humidity,
The triple digit heat clear into night
That starts again before it’s time to eat.
It’s too damn hot to eat, you kiddin’ me,
What is there to write poetry about?
That I keep wipin’ down with alcohol,
That I can’t get more naked than I am.
There’s nothin’ sexy to me come the night.
A minute on the phone “I gotta go!”
What is there to write poetry about?
You said you’d call, I slept right thru it all
If I seem grumpy, I’m way overdue.
We used to have alotta time to spare,
But it’s so hot I miss your spoken verse.
What is there to write poetry about?
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 4th Sep 2019
| Edited 6th Sep 2019
Author's Note
Jes’ blowin’ off steam... The brutal heat & humidity day and all NIGHT, and who knows when it’s gonna stop!
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Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
4th Sep 2019 5:30pm
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6th Sep 2019 1:13pm
You too, huh?
There is no cooler place for me here.
Thank you for coming by, dear Liam.
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There is no cooler place for me here.
Thank you for coming by, dear Liam.
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Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
4th Sep 2019 6:04pm
My feet are constantly searching for the cool spots
beneath the sheets!
(Damn HOT dreams ain't helping)
But this is what comes with Desert living i suppose.
Have You tried munching on cooler things.........
Love the spill mostly because maybe misery enjoys company ; )
beneath the sheets!
(Damn HOT dreams ain't helping)
But this is what comes with Desert living i suppose.
Have You tried munching on cooler things.........
Love the spill mostly because maybe misery enjoys company ; )
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Re: Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
6th Sep 2019 1:23pm
I don’t put my feet between the sheets when it’s like this.
My misery hates company, that’s the point. It wants an answer, cause even though I have an AC, it’s clear at the other end of my apt and it can’t get to me when I’m on my bed, and I can’t afford running it for hours and not feeling it. See why my misery hated company?
And yes, I’ve tried that. From ice pops & frozen fruit bars, to bags of frozen sweet peas I munch like they’re M&M’s!
Thanks for stopping by, brother T.
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My misery hates company, that’s the point. It wants an answer, cause even though I have an AC, it’s clear at the other end of my apt and it can’t get to me when I’m on my bed, and I can’t afford running it for hours and not feeling it. See why my misery hated company?
And yes, I’ve tried that. From ice pops & frozen fruit bars, to bags of frozen sweet peas I munch like they’re M&M’s!
Thanks for stopping by, brother T.
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Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
4th Sep 2019 7:14pm
Those summer hot nights stir up emotions and this quatern was sweltering through to the end.
Excellent stuff Ms. Jade.
Excellent stuff Ms. Jade.
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6th Sep 2019 1:28pm
Thank you so very much, dear Wally.
It’s almost 5:30AM and finally just cool enough to try and catch up with the comments.
I very much appreciate your thoughts, my friend. Do you live where the temps have been baking you to a cinder?
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It’s almost 5:30AM and finally just cool enough to try and catch up with the comments.
I very much appreciate your thoughts, my friend. Do you live where the temps have been baking you to a cinder?
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6th Sep 2019 2:06pm
I live about two hours north of LA. It's was 104 yesterday with some light rain and humidity. One year it was over 100 degrees for three months straight. It doesn't cool down until two or three in the morning (and that's only into the 80s). Fall is nice and winter is chilly, but summers here are brutal. AC is a necessity here.
I grew up in LA and lived there till about 4 years ago. I don't know how managed to live so many years without AC but I do miss the LA weather, when it's 95 or 98 with some breeze compared, but the cost of living here (and less traffic) is a bit more comfy.
I grew up in LA and lived there till about 4 years ago. I don't know how managed to live so many years without AC but I do miss the LA weather, when it's 95 or 98 with some breeze compared, but the cost of living here (and less traffic) is a bit more comfy.
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Oh I envy you, but yes I remember the 3 months of straight constant triple digits that year. Still, sounds like your summers there are just as brutal. Same here with the evenings when they finally go ‘down’ to the 80’s.
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Re: Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
6th Sep 2019 1:38pm
My grateful thanks, Ethan, for you coming in to read & comment on your thoughts... and for an honor of place. Terribly honored.
I wanted to finally write you but had to wait for a lesser time of heat do I could have the strength. It’s about 5:34AM Friday and if’s “only” 80F degrees.
This and the humidity is what’s drastically slowing down my recovery. I keep trying though.., with my poetry, and the audio I sent you, which I’m so glad you enjoy.
I hope you’re hanging in - I read your poetry every chance I get.
jade🐾
I wanted to finally write you but had to wait for a lesser time of heat do I could have the strength. It’s about 5:34AM Friday and if’s “only” 80F degrees.
This and the humidity is what’s drastically slowing down my recovery. I keep trying though.., with my poetry, and the audio I sent you, which I’m so glad you enjoy.
I hope you’re hanging in - I read your poetry every chance I get.
jade🐾
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Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
4th Sep 2019 8:01pm
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6th Sep 2019 1:43pm
Hello, dear Tim, it’s so nice to see you...
I used to live near the coast but not anymore. If I still did, no more triple digits!
I’d love to soak in a cool bath, but I’m too weak to climb outta the tub. I can’t catch a break.
Thanks for dropping by, Tim!
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I used to live near the coast but not anymore. If I still did, no more triple digits!
I’d love to soak in a cool bath, but I’m too weak to climb outta the tub. I can’t catch a break.
Thanks for dropping by, Tim!
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Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
5th Sep 2019 1:21am
I would submit..Jade Tiger is a great "what" to write about...certainly a great writer of the "what" herself...
love
J
love
J
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6th Sep 2019 2:07pm
Why thank you, Jeff, what a lovely endorsement. Never been voted as the “What” girl before, but I’m all set to put the satin banner across my bathing suit and walk the runway with my tiara & trophy!😊
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
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6th Sep 2019 5:11pm
Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
5th Sep 2019 4:09am
Dear J-P,
You’ve done it again! This is a terrific description of how heat and humidity can wear a person out! And, so true, there is only so much naked you can get. With winter you can always put on more layers. Great write! H🌷
You’ve done it again! This is a terrific description of how heat and humidity can wear a person out! And, so true, there is only so much naked you can get. With winter you can always put on more layers. Great write! H🌷
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6th Sep 2019 3:31pm
Thank you, my dear H, for the words of encouragement & support. And that’s exactly the way it goes, sister! 🙏🏻
Jade🐾
Jade🐾
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Re: Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
Thanks so much, HF, I appreciate how you’ve enjoyed this. The thing with the title, it came to me whe. I was feeling at the end of my misery tether, I thoght maybe writing a poem would give me a lift, it usually does. But then I suddenly blurted out “What is there to write poetry about!?”
And so that’s what I wrote about!
The last time I had writer’s block was 2006. Then I discovered that there is no such thing, I had an epiphany... and never experienced writer’s block again. Glad you could stop on by.
Jade🐾
And so that’s what I wrote about!
The last time I had writer’s block was 2006. Then I discovered that there is no such thing, I had an epiphany... and never experienced writer’s block again. Glad you could stop on by.
Jade🐾
Re. What Is There To Write Poetry About
5th Sep 2019 11:03pm
I agree with HF, this has a sense of playful cheek about it that I enjoy. Sounds like you are also in a tropical climate. Stay cool Jadey
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6th Sep 2019 3:54pm
Thank you, Daniel, for dropping by with your thoughts of support. I don’t live in a tropical climate, just the opposite. But every year when Arizona’s hit by the monsoon season, it creeps over to us in southern & I think central Cali. You’d think we’d welcome wherever it dumps rain, but the high heat & humidity brings air instability and areas are hit with dry lightning strikes, and we get even more brush fires. That’s what’s been happening lately in hilly communities.
I’d better end this, a new day to the insanity is starting right now & Im tuckered out.
Jade🐾
I’d better end this, a new day to the insanity is starting right now & Im tuckered out.
Jade🐾
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6th Sep 2019 4:03pm
Oh lord AZ is a hot place to be. I lived in El Paso for a brief time. I passed out twice. Once walking a long way to visit my mother at work, the second time chopping down a dead tree in the backyard. The arid air sucks the moisture out of you.
Get plenty of rest honey. *hugs*
Get plenty of rest honey. *hugs*
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