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Epic called 'October'
A.October or OctoberA., was founded in November by DU Poetry. I am (we are) so happy to read his thoughts which he generously posts on this site.
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My hand quivers as I start this write:
To express to you
My thoughts for you
In ink, with this pen
How shall I put this?
How shall I begin?
To form the perfect words,
As sincere as can be
Without much inhibitions
Pure from my heart, from me
This write:
I dare to write
My thoughts once unwritten
Am I unjust to have this view
And post for all to see?
Maybe, yes, maybe so
Just sit back, relax and read.
So I write:
Half remembering what an Epic meant.
Thinking, do Epics have rhyming schemes?
Or must a story just be told?
Wondering, how the hell am I going to write this said Epic, about someone I barely know.
Here we go:
I have only known OctoberA. for one month and a few days
But he is more than a jolly good decent lad.
OctoberA. has exponential potential and of course a great talent.
Hoping you like the story and the flow.
There isn't much I really know
---unfortunately; yet.
I know this much though:
The man must can kiss [I mean..FUCK].
"Dripping Lips" was pretty epic.
In itself, what an accomplishment it was!
Especially, since 'Dripping Lips" was A.October's first dab at an Erotic.
My imagination was keen
And I beamed
At the details gleaned
So, ehm, as I said..
This man must can fuck [I mean KISS].
A.October has the power to rape
[Yes, I bloody said rape]
Our minds and make us question our intellect.
I speak with truth
[At least, MY truth]
Even though some may think otherwise.
Good for them, I suppose.
Yet I told Alip,
[Alistair.. yes, I'm calling you out]
That some crap
[SHIT! yes, I bloody said S H I T!]
On DUP, gets liked and entered faster than a mind-fuck has you shitting bricks
[crap!!] Utter crap!!
OctoberA. is like a pure-bred.
Pure-breds have stable stature, creed
And of course refined pedigrees.
More like him is what DU needs.
Am I still writing?
[Feels more like I'm rambling]
So on so?
Who ruddy cares, what a Low-Life like me cares... about?
Blah, blah, blah.
Har, har, har.
Shut the fuck up, you Pansy!
No!
No!
No!
Hell-fucking, No!
This write is for October
And October, I do fancy.
Reader:
Yes, by now, I think we've gotten that much. But seriously Jordanne, you do not have to curse.
Dearest Reader:
Yes, of course you are right. Yet passion felt when felt, whether it be in niceties or vulgarity, does not much matter. Passion is passion, expressed on the Train of Thought; the mind reasons.
Back to October!
Yes, October!!
Oh damn, this man can write DEEP.
"Lyrical Thunder" was such a wonder
That kicked my mind and tipped my seat
-- back & steep.
When did I fall
For You
Lyrical Thunder
So close
Dead End
October's Over
After the rain
Words of Goodbye
Titles on Paper
No Easter Bunny,Nightmare
Tired, What to do
Empty Words
No Longer an Anniversary, Kumiko
Last Wish.. Last Light.. Last Happiness.. Tranquility???
Nothing left to me
Who Am I
Autumn
Sunrise & Sundown
Landscapes of Escaping Sadness
Dripping Lips
Captured Heart
When you look at me
Let
me
fall[/font]
I've read your writes
Most I like
And a few I do love
Your words take me on journey
Far away from [Kingston] Surrey
Where I feel like I am next to you, with you
Rather than miles apart
And two bodies of water away
A.October, OctoberA.:
Please never put down your pen
Keep writing, typing and posting
For I want to read your words on deeds..
You, before, have not yet even spoken
So this is it:
I ventured to write an Epic
[Something like an Epic]
If I may..
Not just to write of you
But to write a piece
wonderful and unique
That expressed my thoughts to you.
For you, my Dear
Dearest Mr. October
Keep me sober from being somber;
From my daunting daily woes
And tainted Tormented soul
So sweet, you have me won over
An [attempted] Epic written
For I am quite smitten with Mr. October
This is far from The Iliad
I am no Homer.
14Dec2011By:JAH
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Your words are like licking honey
---mmmm, you sweet talk so well
I am a die-hard Romantic so of course I fell...
You intrigue me, come and meet me
---this silly Capricorn!
We will smoke Jamaican spliffs, come and dance [SOCA] with me
---enlighten my psyche evermore!
________________________________________________________________
My hand quivers as I start this write:
To express to you
My thoughts for you
In ink, with this pen
How shall I put this?
How shall I begin?
To form the perfect words,
As sincere as can be
Without much inhibitions
Pure from my heart, from me
This write:
I dare to write
My thoughts once unwritten
Am I unjust to have this view
And post for all to see?
Maybe, yes, maybe so
Just sit back, relax and read.
So I write:
Half remembering what an Epic meant.
Thinking, do Epics have rhyming schemes?
Or must a story just be told?
Wondering, how the hell am I going to write this said Epic, about someone I barely know.
Here we go:
I have only known OctoberA. for one month and a few days
But he is more than a jolly good decent lad.
OctoberA. has exponential potential and of course a great talent.
Hoping you like the story and the flow.
There isn't much I really know
---unfortunately; yet.
I know this much though:
The man must can kiss [I mean..FUCK].
"Dripping Lips" was pretty epic.
In itself, what an accomplishment it was!
Especially, since 'Dripping Lips" was A.October's first dab at an Erotic.
My imagination was keen
And I beamed
At the details gleaned
So, ehm, as I said..
This man must can fuck [I mean KISS].
A.October has the power to rape
[Yes, I bloody said rape]
Our minds and make us question our intellect.
I speak with truth
[At least, MY truth]
Even though some may think otherwise.
Good for them, I suppose.
Yet I told Alip,
[Alistair.. yes, I'm calling you out]
That some crap
[SHIT! yes, I bloody said S H I T!]
On DUP, gets liked and entered faster than a mind-fuck has you shitting bricks
[crap!!] Utter crap!!
OctoberA. is like a pure-bred.
Pure-breds have stable stature, creed
And of course refined pedigrees.
More like him is what DU needs.
Am I still writing?
[Feels more like I'm rambling]
So on so?
Who ruddy cares, what a Low-Life like me cares... about?
Blah, blah, blah.
Har, har, har.
Shut the fuck up, you Pansy!
No!
No!
No!
Hell-fucking, No!
This write is for October
And October, I do fancy.
Reader:
Yes, by now, I think we've gotten that much. But seriously Jordanne, you do not have to curse.
Dearest Reader:
Yes, of course you are right. Yet passion felt when felt, whether it be in niceties or vulgarity, does not much matter. Passion is passion, expressed on the Train of Thought; the mind reasons.
Back to October!
Yes, October!!
Oh damn, this man can write DEEP.
"Lyrical Thunder" was such a wonder
That kicked my mind and tipped my seat
-- back & steep.
When did I fall
For You
Lyrical Thunder
So close
Dead End
October's Over
After the rain
Words of Goodbye
Titles on Paper
No Easter Bunny,Nightmare
Tired, What to do
Empty Words
No Longer an Anniversary, Kumiko
Last Wish.. Last Light.. Last Happiness.. Tranquility???
Nothing left to me
Who Am I
Autumn
Sunrise & Sundown
Landscapes of Escaping Sadness
Dripping Lips
Captured Heart
When you look at me
Let
me
fall[/font]
I've read your writes
Most I like
And a few I do love
Your words take me on journey
Far away from [Kingston] Surrey
Where I feel like I am next to you, with you
Rather than miles apart
And two bodies of water away
A.October, OctoberA.:
Please never put down your pen
Keep writing, typing and posting
For I want to read your words on deeds..
You, before, have not yet even spoken
So this is it:
I ventured to write an Epic
[Something like an Epic]
If I may..
Not just to write of you
But to write a piece
wonderful and unique
That expressed my thoughts to you.
For you, my Dear
Dearest Mr. October
Keep me sober from being somber;
From my daunting daily woes
And tainted Tormented soul
So sweet, you have me won over
An [attempted] Epic written
For I am quite smitten with Mr. October
This is far from The Iliad
I am no Homer.
14Dec2011By:JAH
_______________________________________________________________
Your words are like licking honey
---mmmm, you sweet talk so well
I am a die-hard Romantic so of course I fell...
You intrigue me, come and meet me
---this silly Capricorn!
We will smoke Jamaican spliffs, come and dance [SOCA] with me
---enlighten my psyche evermore!
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