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4x6
Too Nice
Desires fixer-uppers
eschews the unbroken
Dire Straits
Rouge obsessed world
kindness be damned.
Topsy Turvy
Man greets 20 pedestrians,
facing charges
The End
Spoiler alert
love will destroy hate
Desires fixer-uppers
eschews the unbroken
Dire Straits
Rouge obsessed world
kindness be damned.
Topsy Turvy
Man greets 20 pedestrians,
facing charges
The End
Spoiler alert
love will destroy hate
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 18th Aug 2019
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"6 Word Poem" comp.
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Re. 4x6
Anonymous
18th Aug 2019 8:20pm
Whoa! I can't decide what's more awesome - your entries or that title!
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18th Aug 2019 8:55pm
Thank you, johnny! I'll admit to being pragmatic with the title. I didn't want an overarching title that diminished the meaning or unique quality of each poemette...so why not Math? 😁 I sincerely appreciate your encouraging words (he says without peering over your shoulder)
Re. 4x6
18th Aug 2019 9:13pm
Tells you where my head is at- at first I was wondering, index cards or lumber?
Short and insightful about the state of things today.
Short and insightful about the state of things today.
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Re: Re. 4x6
19th Aug 2019 1:16am
Lumber is definitely my first thought 😁 I appreciate your comment Sir Jazzman! I can't avoid singing Carole Kings ballad when your name appears...you do "take my blues away." 🤓
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18th Aug 2019 9:35pm
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19th Aug 2019 1:18am
Re. 4x6
19th Aug 2019 4:49am
Love them all, but of course especially #4. They even hang together interestingly as a whole set.
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19th Aug 2019 6:37am
Thank you, Titanium! I agree that there is a common thread that the four share and that is love, misunderstood, mistrusted or lacking completely. Number 4 is to validate love as the proven antidote to hate.
Re. 4x6
1st Sep 2019 4:01am
I'm not sure if this comp is still active, but you do an amazing job & wish you an abundance of luck. That last stanza kicked ass!
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1st Sep 2019 10:20pm
Your feelings about the fourth poem makes me a winner. Thank you dear Pandora!
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3rd Sep 2019 8:18pm
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3rd Sep 2019 8:50pm
No matter. I participate in the comps, usually, to knock myself out of a funk by writing on an assigned topic, or to challenge myself...if occasionally I win it's just gravy.