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SENRYU - DEEP BURN
Beads of sweat erupt
Cooling primal dancers’ skin
Coital cardio
Cooling primal dancers’ skin
Coital cardio
Published 23rd Jul 2019
Author's Note
Nature's calisthenics too often neglected.
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23rd Jul 2019 1:50pm
23rd Jul 2019 3:19pm
Why waste money on a home gym system when the calorie cruncher is innate, from nature gifted. And it:s fun 😁
I really appreciate you, Ahavati.
I really appreciate you, Ahavati.
23rd Jul 2019 3:23pm
23rd Jul 2019 3:23pm
23rd Jul 2019 5:45pm
23rd Jul 2019 7:11pm
And when entwined a slice of heaven...unless there are too many bugs. But in the thick of it the world around us could collapse and we'd never know. I think you may enjoy this piece, https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/298814-pressing-flowers/
Ah, to hell with those bugs...what bugs.
If it's good stuff, that's the last thought as you stated. Mosquito bites to those tender spots is a perfect reason to dip & dive the itch away. Always search for the positives.😏
I'll check that piece out, btw...just copied it!
If it's good stuff, that's the last thought as you stated. Mosquito bites to those tender spots is a perfect reason to dip & dive the itch away. Always search for the positives.😏
I'll check that piece out, btw...just copied it!
26th Jul 2019 7:39pm
I like the dip 'n' dive method you suggest. Scratch two itches with one heavenly session.
26th Jul 2019 9:51pm
Ugh....autocorrect incorrected mosquito! 🙄
I'm so glad I ventured back to the other one. Thank you!!
I'm so glad I ventured back to the other one. Thank you!!
23rd Jul 2019 9:50pm
Agree with author note - the one great exercise that is within one's reach when there is a willing partner.
24th Jul 2019 1:58am
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30th Jul 2019 2:38pm
Now that's exercise for the soul as well as body...good cardio!
30th Jul 2019 3:57pm
30th Jul 2019 3:52pm
30th Jul 2019 4:08pm
I love all those adjectives. Arresting is awesome unless it's of the cardiac or crimes and misdemeanors variety. A beautiful way, I think, of saying breathtaking. 🙏💕
