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An Inked Witness
Now where was I?
Oh yes, gathering cool facts
from northern winds,
smelling secrets of the desert
in a southern breeze.
A gale brewing from the West
tosses ideas in my direction,
entangled with esoteric mysteries
blown in from eastern shores.
In a flurry all four winds fuse
to tangible silence,
a moment’s clarity brings exquisite stillness,
peels back the techie blabber,
offers shelter from a howling world.
Thoughts flow into the pen’s ink,
seep onto the page,
catch the act of a thorn
piercing a tough lump of skin
on the underbelly of my foot.
Mildly stunned, I hover
between two worlds,
witness a sacred act,
bite my tongue
for fear of disturbing
‘the silence from which it came’.
The door bell rings.
Whisked back to the present
I scramble into action.
A friend hands back the keys of my van
which he’d borrowed for the day
to shift stuff.
#WendellBerry
Oh yes, gathering cool facts
from northern winds,
smelling secrets of the desert
in a southern breeze.
A gale brewing from the West
tosses ideas in my direction,
entangled with esoteric mysteries
blown in from eastern shores.
In a flurry all four winds fuse
to tangible silence,
a moment’s clarity brings exquisite stillness,
peels back the techie blabber,
offers shelter from a howling world.
Thoughts flow into the pen’s ink,
seep onto the page,
catch the act of a thorn
piercing a tough lump of skin
on the underbelly of my foot.
Mildly stunned, I hover
between two worlds,
witness a sacred act,
bite my tongue
for fear of disturbing
‘the silence from which it came’.
The door bell rings.
Whisked back to the present
I scramble into action.
A friend hands back the keys of my van
which he’d borrowed for the day
to shift stuff.
#WendellBerry
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 17th Jul 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Comp entry for “The Simple Life”, hosted by Johnny Blaze.
Inspired mainly by Wendell Berry’s poem “How To Be A Poet (to remind myself)”. The link has Wendell reading his own poem:
{https://www.brainpickings.org/2015/05/12/how-to-be-a-poet-wendell-berry/}
The italicised quote in my poem is the final line of Wendell’s poem.
(photo credit: Joshua Bond; flowers of an Australian Silver Oak tree (Grevillia) in our garden)
Inspired mainly by Wendell Berry’s poem “How To Be A Poet (to remind myself)”. The link has Wendell reading his own poem:
{https://www.brainpickings.org/2015/05/12/how-to-be-a-poet-wendell-berry/}
The italicised quote in my poem is the final line of Wendell’s poem.
(photo credit: Joshua Bond; flowers of an Australian Silver Oak tree (Grevillia) in our garden)
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Re. An Inked Witness
17th Jul 2019 10:32pm
I really like this but I'm having difficulty expressing why ... I suppose part of the reason is the last part: it anchors the poem in our common realities ... but the preceding parts are every ones different meandering thoughts ... Poorly described by me but there you go ...
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17th Jul 2019 10:43pm
Hmmm, perhaps it is because the poem speaks to that deep human yearning to find a way of living on this planet with integrity, in a way that we feel we are not betraying ourselves, not compromising some kind of 'soul truth'. No easy task. One of my heroes who seemed to manage it was Brother Roger of the Taizé Community in France. Another was the Austrian artist Friedensreich Hundertwasser.
I suppose the conundrum is aptly put in the bible about "being in the world, but not of it" - which presents us with an ongoing tension for which we only ever find a partial resolution, yet long so much for a total resolution.
I suppose the conundrum is aptly put in the bible about "being in the world, but not of it" - which presents us with an ongoing tension for which we only ever find a partial resolution, yet long so much for a total resolution.
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One of the things I loved about Wendell Berry was his ability to fluctuate effortlessly between the imagined and the real - as though his physical presence was the very conduit, or veil between nature and the spiritual world. And if you think about it, we are to a certain degree through our open mind and heart, and imaginations of past or desired experiences. We are both physical and spiritual - and the earth is both grounded and physical.
I think this encapsulates the essence of his poetry beautifully, Josh. Very well done. To withhold sound for the sake of silence - or, rather, maintain the value of silence is priceless.
I think this encapsulates the essence of his poetry beautifully, Josh. Very well done. To withhold sound for the sake of silence - or, rather, maintain the value of silence is priceless.
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Re: Re. An Inked Witness
18th Jul 2019 3:00pm
Thank you for your interesting comments, Ahavati; I always appreciate your insights. It was the last line of Wendell's poem (I never envisaged him having such a southern accent until I listened to the recording) that was the catalyst to stop reading and start writing. It is those moments of clarity amidst and extra-deep silence/stillness that I value as one of the most precious experiences in life. I'm glad that notion came over to you in the poem.
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There is nothing more wonderful than getting lost in a moment. One of my favorite types of escapism. But, somehow, inevitably life intervenes in one form or another. Jostling us back into reality.
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Thank you Jemac. "...lost in a moment" - much experienced as a child playing, only to be jerked back to 'reality' of tea-time-now-wash-your-hands. I now find such moments through poetry, or out in the garden and find I have less and less patience with 'the door bell ringing'. Either I'm getting old and cranky, or I'm rediscovering and re-appreciating the value of my childhood ability to be whisked away into other worlds - hope it's the latter :))
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Thank you Rose for commenting. Glad you liked it. I've always liked the idea of the wind carrying special messages, each of the four directions with their own special themes, and gifts.
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2019 1:00pm
"In a flurry all four winds fuse
to tangible silence,
a moment’s clarity brings exquisite stillness,
peels back the techie blabber,
offers shelter from a howling world."
I enjoy the contrast here of the ( modern ) world howling as opposed to the wind.
Josh, thank you for participating and good luck in the comp.
to tangible silence,
a moment’s clarity brings exquisite stillness,
peels back the techie blabber,
offers shelter from a howling world."
I enjoy the contrast here of the ( modern ) world howling as opposed to the wind.
Josh, thank you for participating and good luck in the comp.
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18th Jul 2019 3:10pm
Thank you Johnny; you spotted it. I was trying to stay with 'wind'-type words/verbs when referencing 'the modern world' too.
Re. An Inked Witness
18th Jul 2019 5:30pm
This speaks to me of finding the purity of the living moment, it's simple and profound truth. in the silence of self. It is like my daily meditation. Going into the silence, allowing breath, mantras and images to clear and ground me, before plunging back into all the cacophony of the technologically linked world. The winds from each direction makes me think of absorbing various cultural influences. I've dabbled in the art, philosophy and spiritual doctrines of different cultures over the years and found enrichment and enlarged perspective. Terrific ink Josh.
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18th Jul 2019 11:06pm
Thank you Daniel for reading and giving me considered thoughts again on one of my poems. I think people increasingly have a need to find silence & stillness amidst a technologically mediated and noisy world - meditation is a good practice; for me it's my rowing machine at a nice slow steady pace and being very aware of breath.
I like the way you connect differing cultures to the four winds. Thanks again for the feed-back, best regards, Josh.
I like the way you connect differing cultures to the four winds. Thanks again for the feed-back, best regards, Josh.
Re. An Inked Witness
19th Jul 2019 6:16am
I enjoy that moment of being whisked away, deep in thought and the shifting back to the present. You did it so non-chalantly it's was very cool. I have stated before, the competitions that Johnny and Ahavati host offer that opportunity exposing us to poets and writers and their styles.
Thank you for sharing. I see I have a lot of reading and writing to do this weekend.
Thank you for sharing. I see I have a lot of reading and writing to do this weekend.
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Re: Re. An Inked Witness
19th Jul 2019 11:48am
Thank you Wally. I enjoy too being in another world, not so much being jerked back to 'this' one. The J & A Classic-Corner comps are good motivators to check out various poets, that's for sure.
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20th Jul 2019 2:39am
I just listened to the reading and it is amazing, I love the quoted line and your interpretation of it, how you described the balancing act of technology with innate wisdom that we are faced with as modern poets when we try to write something, and the discipline involved..
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20th Jul 2019 5:19pm
Thank you PR for the comment. Yes, Wendell's own recording is really striking. The 'disruptor' element of technology isn't just modern (post-war) either, Ever since the early days of the Industrial Revolution (in Europe at least, 1750s onwards) voices have been raised against technology promoting the loss of vital connection with Nature, with community, and within ourselves. It's difficult to fins a 'quiet space' anymore, and with no light pollution (let alone no EMF pollution).
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21st Jul 2019 2:12am
Here in the U.S. we have state and national parks, the only places left that are completely wild and free, but if it wasn't for conservation efforts of people who cared (like Teddy Roosevelt) we wouldn't even have that. I live near a state park, I do visit it and it inspired some of my nature poems, I don't know how I would write them without that inspiration because I live in a city..
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