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Disease
somewere in the most deepest ,darkest part of her
lies lonelyness. everyknow and then it takes over her.it screams at her and chew on her inner flesh that keeps her going,
leveing her with a fountin of tears.
it sends tornados to her stomich and thunder to her heart,
leving her with a fountin of tears.
but no one knows what has become of her, what demons has taken controle of her....it takes over her...she hides it..holding it in so that her sin wount bring disaster to this world...
letting her walk untill she can no longer walk anymore...her soul bound to perishe...leveing her nothing but a walking corps.
her disease that could end all humanity...ending it all of sadness lonelyness..and fears..
leveing her with a fountin of tears...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
lies lonelyness. everyknow and then it takes over her.it screams at her and chew on her inner flesh that keeps her going,
leveing her with a fountin of tears.
it sends tornados to her stomich and thunder to her heart,
leving her with a fountin of tears.
but no one knows what has become of her, what demons has taken controle of her....it takes over her...she hides it..holding it in so that her sin wount bring disaster to this world...
letting her walk untill she can no longer walk anymore...her soul bound to perishe...leveing her nothing but a walking corps.
her disease that could end all humanity...ending it all of sadness lonelyness..and fears..
leveing her with a fountin of tears...
-Kumiko Yamamoto
Published 12th Dec 2011
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Anonymous
12th Dec 2011 7:07am
I know how hard it is to write, when english is not your first language, and I can see you are trying very hard. well done.
12th Dec 2011 8:46am
erm this is a deep poem and I agree with alip you are trying hard and you're doing good better than i freaking could in japanese for sure and is this you this girl you speak of ??
12th Dec 2011 4:40pm
12th Dec 2011 4:16pm
so your english is'nt that great''SO WHAT!!''I think that this piece is increadible,i also would like to know if this girl you write about,is it yourself.
12th Dec 2011 4:41pm
12th Dec 2011 5:06pm
yes... i comment on it i injoy it very much...you are a creative writter :)
13th Dec 2011 1:15am
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22nd Dec 2011 1:41am
5th Jan 2012 10:30am
wonderful work i love it please start writing again soon you are a truly master at what u do
5th Jan 2012 5:51pm
26th Feb 2012 5:31pm
as it spreads
so many are misled
because they are fed
the same destruction that makes her sad....
so many are misled
because they are fed
the same destruction that makes her sad....
28th Feb 2012 4:27am
8th Mar 2012 6:02am
It's spilling alot of feelings and that's always a great aspect in writings.
8th Mar 2012 7:08am
7th Apr 2013 3:45pm
Absolutely beautiful, I could feel the anguish and pain but also the abyss of emptiness. You write wonderful poems dear.
20th Apr 2013 8:54pm
