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Fall In Love With A Poet
God, I hope I fall in love with a poet
He’ll write me in his words
They’ll be the most perfect words spoken
Maybe I’ll turn out to be his epic muse
A secret lover between his dark lines
Or a spark that finally lit the fuse
God, I hope I fall in love with a poet
Finding that spark in our conversations
Penning it out, throwing a twist on it
I’d be the silkiness in your satin sheet set
And I’d be the plump and comfy mattress
That is if his writing were the bed
God, I hope I fall in love with a poet
Someone who can feel through what I write
Light a fucking torch for me and throw it
I’d be the metaphors and cliffhangers
All the multifarious dips and curves
I’d be the hook, but also the anchor
God, I hope I fall in love with a poet
Who really knows how to love
And even more how to show it
He’ll write me in his words
They’ll be the most perfect words spoken
Maybe I’ll turn out to be his epic muse
A secret lover between his dark lines
Or a spark that finally lit the fuse
God, I hope I fall in love with a poet
Finding that spark in our conversations
Penning it out, throwing a twist on it
I’d be the silkiness in your satin sheet set
And I’d be the plump and comfy mattress
That is if his writing were the bed
God, I hope I fall in love with a poet
Someone who can feel through what I write
Light a fucking torch for me and throw it
I’d be the metaphors and cliffhangers
All the multifarious dips and curves
I’d be the hook, but also the anchor
God, I hope I fall in love with a poet
Who really knows how to love
And even more how to show it
Written by
LivDiane
Published 11th Jul 2019
Author's Note
Cause I have a love for ‘rhymers’.
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11th Jul 2019 4:55am
Aww I’m so happy you liked it HF. And damnit I just broke up with a banker! (Not kidding.) Lol, thanks for reading and commenting, luv!
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11th Jul 2019 4:53am
Careful, very slippery.
Falling out of love with a poet
Kool write Liv may you find that poet, the one that steals the moon to write you the stars
Falling out of love with a poet
Kool write Liv may you find that poet, the one that steals the moon to write you the stars
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11th Jul 2019 4:56am
I know, I’m a sucker, Carpe. Thanks for the read and comment❤️
Oh man, “steals the moon to write me the stars.” That’s poetic af.
Oh man, “steals the moon to write me the stars.” That’s poetic af.
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11th Jul 2019 12:27pm
That’s very sweet of you to say, Tim! Can’t say I fully agree :P And I doubt it will happen but thanks for the read and kind comment❤️
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11th Jul 2019 7:02am
Beautiful write. I so get it but for me someone that is creative but nicer would be a musician but a poet would do. Yes to fall for someone that would get you would he perfect.
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11th Jul 2019 12:47pm
Lol, I felt like a musician might be pushing my luck but yes, that would be lovely. Thanks for the read and comment, Stanhoven!
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11th Jul 2019 1:19pm
This is such a great read !!
I hope you get that man
Indeed, he will be the lucky one
Like
I hope you get that man
Indeed, he will be the lucky one
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 1:37pm
Here's the thing...love can make poets out of us all, I think. So there's a better than good chance you WILL fall in love with a poet...and he you. :-)
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11th Jul 2019 1:42pm
I like where you’re going with this, Willow! Thank you, dearest, for the read and kind comment❤️
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11th Jul 2019 1:43pm
All of your writings are amazing but this one blew the ship out of the water. I dont hope you fall in love with a poet but i dont hope against euther i pray you fall in love with one who knows respects and appreciates the gem you are
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11th Jul 2019 1:47pm
Really? I’m glad you think that, I thought it was just a silly write. Just goes to show it can always be more or less for someone else :) thanks for the kind words, Liam; I think you all are way too nice to me haha but thanks for the read and comment, luv. Greatly appreciated.
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11th Jul 2019 3:39pm
Freakin' Gorgeous spill, Beautiful !! Wow!
Nice flow and tempo and rhymes and feelings........
& for the record, I hope You don't fall in love with a Poet (and vice - versa) but if You do, totally get it as it can be one of the most exhilarating experiences -- to become intimate in a sapiosexual way (speaking from experiences, of course)
Nice flow and tempo and rhymes and feelings........
& for the record, I hope You don't fall in love with a Poet (and vice - versa) but if You do, totally get it as it can be one of the most exhilarating experiences -- to become intimate in a sapiosexual way (speaking from experiences, of course)
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11th Jul 2019 3:54pm
I just need a lover to understand profound metaphors so I don’t always have to explain myself haha thanks sweet Tallen for the read and comment, luv! Oh and the generous RL add :)
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11th Jul 2019 4:18pm
i told Sky_dancer that i understood about 70%
of life and i got the feeling she may have been tiring of explaining stuff like metaphors and idioms (even humor) to me.
Good Luck
of life and i got the feeling she may have been tiring of explaining stuff like metaphors and idioms (even humor) to me.
Good Luck
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11th Jul 2019 9:55pm
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Wonderfully romantic piece, Liv! Brava! I am enthralled by your word usage. You taught me "multifarious." It was an unlikely muse, a coworker actually, that sparked my flame. The words seem to flow as if staged and waiting to be poured out when inspired by a muse. I find it fascinating and often frustrating that one with whom I am most intimate does not inspire me, in the least, as a muse.
Thank you for the think. I think you may enjoy this shorty of mine:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/206339-poetditty/:
Thank you for the think. I think you may enjoy this shorty of mine:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/206339-poetditty/:
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11th Jul 2019 9:57pm
Oh thank you! I do like to switch up my vocabulary as to not be repetitive in writing (which I sometimes still am)! Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I’ll have to check out that shorty of yours! And oh for the RL add, so generous, luv!
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Anonymous
11th Jul 2019 9:51pm
Oh God this is beautiful. Captures longing - the longing of wanting to be loved on a creative, fiercely emotional level. The nourishment we all need but can never get.
A poet, my God a poet. Using powerful words to express life at its essence. So perfect.
Oh God this is beautiful
A poet, my God a poet. Using powerful words to express life at its essence. So perfect.
Oh God this is beautiful
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11th Jul 2019 9:58pm
Wow, KillHope. You really made me blush there with your comments. I’m so happy it’s been received this well! Thank you for dropping in to read and comment! ❤️
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12th Jul 2019 7:26pm
Wow, thank you so much CNB! And for the RL, add — how generous of you! Thanks for the read and comment, I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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13th Jul 2019 2:00am
Oh, MV! That’s so sweet of you to say! Thanks so much reading and commenting, luv!
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13th Jul 2019 2:33pm
Could it be as simple as wish for a particular type person? That would be great and would compliment a great piece
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13th Jul 2019 2:55pm
Hahaha I wish, if so this is my wishful thinking poem then! Thanks for the read and comment, luv!
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13th Jul 2019 3:40pm
You made me see what you have seen, and enjoy what you have found pleasant, your words turned into a performance. There I sat in my chair in the theater of you mind. Bravo.
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13th Jul 2019 3:50pm
Oh I love this comment! The theatre of my mind, very much so. Thank you so much for stopping in for a read and comment, dear!
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Anonymous
18th Jul 2019 1:56am
This is lovely. ...poetic and tangible. ..a good balance...
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27th Jul 2019 5:40am
this reflection adds spice to the thought, inspiring a new baby in the community whom we all call a poet.
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Anonymous
20th Dec 2019 12:35pm
Don't know how I missed this piece! It is excellently done!
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2020 7:25am
By the way, I just so happen to know a Poet....eligible, almost attractive and women (even those I'm not related to) think I might be a good catch!) I could arrange a free, 30 day trial!) LOLOLOLOL
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