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Muchly & Mighty Muchly Magdalenian
beware …she seems a softened simple
saint of silence at first sight …growing
intricately exquisite as you gradually crawl
inroads to her tenderly heavyloaded warps
& wefts in a marring incursion inner you
just its when her stuffed in uncontainably
contained emotive-veined concealments
unleash in a precisely scribed welsh assault
deafeningly enlarging as a ticking darkness
in an anytime potentially knocking down
heady thunderstorm in a cup apocalypse
sprawling elegant to be bloody exploded
from a classic castle full of versed roses
that her nuancedly easy skilled blooms
of innate fragrance it bleeds breathes
her drawing in voice as if finely extruded of
patented & elusively hidden n-ingredients
melds on the x-factoring mojo to her legend
For Avatars Amok! Comp.. & a lil tribute to my DU legend ev Poetess- Magdalena
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Magdalena/
Published 5th Jul 2019
Author's Note
Mags ..aw ..hope you dunn mind;) its all juz my scribble...of your adored poetics & perennially happening presence in DU as a shining star ever xx .
(*had used your current DU DP avatar in the comp. would remove the same if you feel the need so any..)
Thanks dear Ahavati for a fine comp. to enter :)
(*had used your current DU DP avatar in the comp. would remove the same if you feel the need so any..)
Thanks dear Ahavati for a fine comp. to enter :)
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5th Jul 2019 11:55am
A VERY befitting tribute to our Magdalena, Uma! I am sure she will be thrilled!
Best of luck in the comp! xo
Best of luck in the comp! xo
5th Jul 2019 3:53pm
Have just begun familiarizing myself with her works, but have greatly enjoyed the full dimensions of her audios. It's great to see you spreading such affectionate positivity. <3
5th Jul 2019 6:43pm
Thank you beautiful lady. I don't mind at all and I'm honoured by your tribute. I am a jumbled up mixture of mixes. I'm a lot more mindful the older I become and keep my fire in check most of the time lol.
It's good to get a of snippet of oneself through someone else's eyes. I love it. :) xx
It's good to get a of snippet of oneself through someone else's eyes. I love it. :) xx
5th Jul 2019 7:25pm
I've only seen snippets of her work and no doubt there's great deal of talent and I can certainly see how much you love and respect her as poet and fellow artist. Beautifully articulated dear Uma, i much enjoyed reading this.
8th Jul 2019 11:50pm
9th Jul 2019 00:55am
This has a cadence like Van Morrison's Moondance when read aloud. Speaking of which, damn. Really intense delivery on this one. I would be blown away if you audio recorded this
10th Jul 2019 3:53am
11th Jul 2019 1:19pm
