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Magic pill taken
Look! Above the hill it peeks
Put me in coach, please!
Look! Above the hill it peeks
Put me in coach, please!
Published 4th Jul 2019
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I'm not tell'in, will you?
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4th Jul 2019 12:08pm
4th Jul 2019 6:54pm
To complete, what for some is, the patriotic trio, I took the white pill. Generic version of the, way too expensive, blue pill. I'm an economizing stuff 😁 Thank you, Ahavati!
4th Jul 2019 8:36pm
4th Jul 2019 8:39pm
4th Jul 2019 8:41pm
4th Jul 2019 10:56pm
A salute from this gal to your salutation! 🥂
Have yourself a happy, ummm.... big banging 4th!🍌
Have yourself a happy, ummm.... big banging 4th!🍌
5th Jul 2019 00:10am
Thank you. I'm sure it'll be loads of fun...you too. The bang may be a solo shot but fun still.
6th Jul 2019 9:39pm
At my age I could use the boost or comfort of a pill. Got any extras? Fine write, Gahdess!
6th Jul 2019 9:44pm
It just so happen...😁 I was hoping you'd read this...I mean not saying you need it necessarily but rather understand
