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treachery
stalker of my daydreams
wondering if I'm thinking of you--
sexual hunger ravenous in nature
you make me hurt with want
but I have control in this one place
my sacred divinity--
Mistress of my own domain
you may not enter unless I will it
starve or feed your face elsewhere
I will not bend to your demands
splayed and open--
flagrant cunt masturbating treachery
you go under brainwashed by my sexuality
feed the fiend who loves to be mean
Sadistic prick breaking my back
moaning sins nature
creamy and otherworldly
you know not what you've awakened in me
deadly and calculating I'm coming for you
watch me evolve exhaling stars
escalating my violence on your weaknesses
I'm a flash mob--
you'll never see me coming
fierce is the day that saw me
stalking your shadows
the prey is now the hunter
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Re. treachery
16th Jun 2019 10:58pm
Re: Re. treachery
16th Jun 2019 10:59pm
thank you graciously dearest Wanderer for reading and sharing your thoughts with me...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. treachery
16th Jun 2019 11:20pm
This is indeed a dark warning for someone, you have a way with these piece. They are both dark and sexual, and all powerful. Tight
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Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:40pm
thank you graciously dearest I IS ME for your beautifully thoughtful comment...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. treachery
16th Jun 2019 11:37pm
Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:41pm
Re. treachery
17th Jun 2019 6:47am
Reminds me of those more powerful Bond girls that have a sting in the tail (as opposed to those he closes the movie with).
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Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:42pm
thank you graciously dearest Solomon for the fantastic comparison a bond girl hmm giggles...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. treachery
Anonymous
17th Jun 2019 7:08am
❤ ... my Queen
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Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:43pm
Re. treachery
17th Jun 2019 9:15am
Damn woman, this was fierce and one intense warning...
You know how to describe your every aching need & its impact effortlessly. You're so in touch with it, I just read in amazement...
I especially loved....
"splayed and open--
flagrant cunt masturbating treachery
you go under brainwashed by my sexuality "
....I've noticed the rhyme you've been adding & love em. Perhaps they've been there & I'm blind. Lol
🖤🌹
You know how to describe your every aching need & its impact effortlessly. You're so in touch with it, I just read in amazement...
I especially loved....
"splayed and open--
flagrant cunt masturbating treachery
you go under brainwashed by my sexuality "
....I've noticed the rhyme you've been adding & love em. Perhaps they've been there & I'm blind. Lol
🖤🌹
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Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:44pm
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora for such a lovely comment... as for the rhythm in this poem you have a good eye some do and some don't it just happens that way....
I cherish you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
I cherish you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:45pm
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17th Jun 2019 7:39pm
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Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:45pm
Re. treachery
17th Jun 2019 10:11pm
I would be delighted to be your prey. So much of your poetry seduces me. This is no exception.
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Re: Re. treachery
20th Jun 2019 4:46pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas I'm so happy you found this one pleasing...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹