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Sets Fire to the Rain
A nerve
hit
sharp;
ploughed under,
not
over the top
each
word
counts …
extraordinary pain
turned into
softened edges.
Mind sifted
heart gifted
delayed reaction
months later
returning
to check
state
of
consciousness.
Some angels
suffer
unduly
for their poetry.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Duende/
Published 14th Jun 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Comp entry for "Doppelgänger: the DUP Oscars", hosted by highlyfunctional.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Duende/
Extraordinary poetry that comes from extraordinary depths. On her DUP home page she notes: ‘About me’ - “sets fire to the rain”. A more apt summary is impossible to write.
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Duende/
Extraordinary poetry that comes from extraordinary depths. On her DUP home page she notes: ‘About me’ - “sets fire to the rain”. A more apt summary is impossible to write.
(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
14th Jun 2019 10:23am
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14th Jun 2019 11:22am
Thank you Melia for your kind words. Duende is a very special poet I've admired since I first joined DUP. And interesting fact about tornados I didn't know. Best regards, Josh.
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
14th Jun 2019 11:54am
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14th Jun 2019 11:57am
Thank you HF; every poem of hers I read virtually completely floors me. Thank you for the comment - and for instigating this excellent comp {I have more ... :)) }
14th Jun 2019 12:11pm
Excellent ink, Josh! Very befitting of her. I miss her and hope she returns soon. 📝❤
14th Jun 2019 12:12pm
Anonymous
14th Jun 2019 2:01pm
Duende is an amazing soul & I miss her words here very much. You've done her justice, to be sure. Beautiful homage
14th Jun 2019 4:15pm
Thank you Willow and for the RL. Yes, I miss words too. I value your comments & insights so I'm feeling good right now you think I've done her justice :))
14th Jun 2019 4:27pm
Beautiful. I enjoy the spirit of your tributes. I am inspired to check out her writing. <3
14th Jun 2019 4:29pm
Thank you Daniel. Absolutely well worth checking out (as a pejudiced fan of hers). Take a deep breath first before reading :))
14th Jun 2019 5:52pm
You embodied the style and essence. That's a sign of a great writer. You've brought attention to others about her work and reignited interests.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
14th Jun 2019 8:32pm
Thank you Wally for the complement. She is a special talented poet and too good to be missed (as it were). I'm sure there are more I have not yet come across, and this Doppelgänger comp is showing me DUP poets I've never heard of.
15th Jun 2019 3:21pm
15th Jun 2019 6:08pm
Thank you Liam for checking in here, for the supportive comment - and for the RL. If you read some of Duende's poems, you'll know the "technique with a pen" on this poem was not just me, but pushed along too by Duende's powerful writes. And a belated welcome to DUP. Best regards, Josh.
16th Jun 2019 11:11pm
Yes this captures Duende wonderfully Josh...return soon Poet.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
17th Jun 2019 2:50pm
