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Tourmaline
it comes when summer
is a geisha fan unfolding
for the soaring heat
something in the cabinet
aged to silly perfection
more beautifully grotesque
than a hammerhead shark
with tourmaline eyes
a large tree
found
growing inside
of Carlsbad
is less puzzling
than this love
Published 13th Jun 2019
| Edited 3rd Feb 2020
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13th Jun 2019 3:55am
“it is tempting to waste time in
the sand bars of inexperience
to climb a mountain of thoughts
just to stare down on strip mines
of inanimate action I throw in my hat...”
Well. That’s a bit harsh but it is what it is... I feel the aforementioned; deeply ! In terms of wasting time & energy. Sighs.
Nice one, ToeTag... 😎
the sand bars of inexperience
to climb a mountain of thoughts
just to stare down on strip mines
of inanimate action I throw in my hat...”
Well. That’s a bit harsh but it is what it is... I feel the aforementioned; deeply ! In terms of wasting time & energy. Sighs.
Nice one, ToeTag... 😎
13th Jun 2019 4:22am
yeah, thanks for comiserating, I always enjoy a harsh buzz when it's called for I guess⚰ that's why me mum named me Toetag.
8th Jan 2020 11:04pm
9th Jan 2020 7:00am
