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Take Me Like A Pill
Let me be your Xanax
Just let me leave you chill
Throw me back, then just relax
Baby, take me like a pill
Let me be your ecstasy
All your inhibitions will drop
Crush me up and mix me in
And then pour me on the rocks
Take me like a vitamin
So you can taste me everyday
I promise I’ll be good to you
Oh, in every single way
Throw me back like adderall
Let me take you on a thrill
You crave my high, don’t deny
So just take me like a pill
Put me in your mouth
So I can melt under your tongue
If you think you can handle it
I’ll make you come undone
Let me be your Lortab
I can chase away your pain
Light you up or fuck you up
Very little will remain
Though I feel I must disclose
That addiction is very real
You won’t hear me complaining
So baby, take me like a pill
Just let me leave you chill
Throw me back, then just relax
Baby, take me like a pill
Let me be your ecstasy
All your inhibitions will drop
Crush me up and mix me in
And then pour me on the rocks
Take me like a vitamin
So you can taste me everyday
I promise I’ll be good to you
Oh, in every single way
Throw me back like adderall
Let me take you on a thrill
You crave my high, don’t deny
So just take me like a pill
Put me in your mouth
So I can melt under your tongue
If you think you can handle it
I’ll make you come undone
Let me be your Lortab
I can chase away your pain
Light you up or fuck you up
Very little will remain
Though I feel I must disclose
That addiction is very real
You won’t hear me complaining
So baby, take me like a pill
Published 12th Jun 2019
| Edited 13th Jun 2019
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12th Jun 2019 4:14pm
12th Jun 2019 4:28pm
Aww, Rjm, thanks for the read and comment! Oh and I’m honored to have made your RL❤️ I enjoyed writing this, the little innuendos here and there.
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12th Jun 2019 4:28pm
Thanks! It was a fun one to write, that’s for sure. Thank you, Rex, for the read and the comment :)
12th Jun 2019 4:37pm
12th Jun 2019 4:46pm
Thanks, dear AspergerPoet❤️ Yes, that’s my favorite part about the whole piece. The innuendos all over :) thanks for read and comment!
12th Jun 2019 4:39pm
Keep it ... Love the sexy analogies ... quite epic actually ... Bless and love ...
12th Jun 2019 4:47pm
Oh, Alan! Thank you, I wasn’t entirely sure if I liked it but the more I read it, I think it may be here to stay :) thanks as always for the read and comment❤️
12th Jun 2019 6:25pm
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13th Jun 2019 5:15am
It MIGHT have been a little pop-ish when writing it :P thanks for the read and comment, Leo!
13th Jun 2019 5:20am
13th Jun 2019 7:40am
I'm popping some beautiful Liv right now
great inking poetess...
love Brenda 💕
great inking poetess...
love Brenda 💕
13th Jun 2019 7:41am
Yasss, Brenda! Thank you, dear :) for the read, the comments and the unending love! ❤️ You’re such a gem.
13th Jun 2019 7:44am
you are too beautiful one 🌹 in case you didn't know Raven is my alter ❤
13th Jun 2019 7:54am
Yes, yes. I saw that a week or so ago I believe and then totally forgot it was you and had to go looking again😂
13th Jun 2019 7:56am
giggles I love writing under Raven it's freeing I don't have to be perfect here ❤
13th Jun 2019 7:57am
13th Jun 2019 7:45am
excellent ink, original metaphor, fantastic rhyming scheme what's not to like? Thoroughly enjoyed this scribe from start to finish - an easy RL add :-))))))))))))))))
13th Jun 2019 7:56am
Davidddddd, you honor me, seriously. Thank you so much! I honestly couldn’t even sleep last night until I fully had these words out! Thanks for the read, always, the comment and especially the RL add! 🥰
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14th Jun 2019 12:24pm
Surely great song potential - not sure it's pop-ish style, could also be 'techno'.
14th Jun 2019 1:06pm
Oh I agree. I didn’t quite consider that at first, I like the different twist though. Thank you, Josh, for the read and the comment❤️
16th Jun 2019 1:33am
16th Jun 2019 4:17am
Thank you, Visionz! That’s so kind of you, I appreciate the read and sweet comment :)
29th Jun 2019 3:21am
Let me be your Percocet
We’ll kick back and nod out
Let me make sure you’re all set
My voice above a quiet shout
Let me be your Morphine
We’ll swim until we’re out of gas
Your hair smells like chlorine
We’ll sleep inside the big tall grass
We’ll kick back and nod out
Let me make sure you’re all set
My voice above a quiet shout
Let me be your Morphine
We’ll swim until we’re out of gas
Your hair smells like chlorine
We’ll sleep inside the big tall grass
29th Jun 2019 3:23am
YES, Anthony! You're on the right track :P Thanks for the read and comment! Wish I'd have had that to add in there before haha
29th Jun 2019 5:33am
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3rd Jul 2019 9:07am
This would make a fine song! Good job. I like how you build it up with the drugs and their effects. Smart.
3rd Jul 2019 9:29am
1st Oct 2019 12:55pm
This is real nice. The diction is just out of this world and with very rich content
28th Oct 2019 5:29am
