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WAKE UP!
Wake up please!
Hurry, get dressed
It’s time for you to leave
Don’t expect breakfast
Addresses and numbers needn’t be exchanged
I don’t want to know who you are
I don’t even what to hear your name
We both just needed to get laid
Just leave quietly
No need to cause a scene
If you need to use the toilet
Do so quickly and leave up the seat
So let me make this simple and plain
You’re nothing more than a one-night-stand
“UNDERSTAND?”
‘Sex’ was the ‘name of the game’
So Audios, Sayonara, Auf Wiedersehen
HIT THE ROAD…GET LOST!
Now go back from wherever you came
Don’t leave a thing behind to come back and claim
To me your were nothing more
Then another good little screw
So leave before I say something hurtful
Like, “I think I love you!”
Hurry, get dressed
It’s time for you to leave
Don’t expect breakfast
Addresses and numbers needn’t be exchanged
I don’t want to know who you are
I don’t even what to hear your name
We both just needed to get laid
Just leave quietly
No need to cause a scene
If you need to use the toilet
Do so quickly and leave up the seat
So let me make this simple and plain
You’re nothing more than a one-night-stand
“UNDERSTAND?”
‘Sex’ was the ‘name of the game’
So Audios, Sayonara, Auf Wiedersehen
HIT THE ROAD…GET LOST!
Now go back from wherever you came
Don’t leave a thing behind to come back and claim
To me your were nothing more
Then another good little screw
So leave before I say something hurtful
Like, “I think I love you!”
Author's Note
Inspired by my regretful past, in which I say, something I wish I would have said.
"I loved you Diane and still do."
"I loved you Diane and still do."
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Re. WAKE UP!
Anonymous
10th Jun 2019 8:53pm
Why does it sometimes seem like the unsaid things weigh more than our spoken word?
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10th Jun 2019 11:13pm
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10th Jun 2019 11:52pm
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16th Jun 2019 10:07pm
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11th Jun 2019 4:58am
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11th Jun 2019 6:50am
This rhyme came to mind after reading this and imagining the picture it painted:
Get out of bed, you've done your bit!
Get dressed and leave behind no kit!
We did agree it was 'no strings';
I collect no names, numbers, from flings.
Get out of bed, you've done your bit!
Get dressed and leave behind no kit!
We did agree it was 'no strings';
I collect no names, numbers, from flings.
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16th Jun 2019 10:11pm
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We hate your poem till you redeem yourself at the end
Then there is pathos
Asshole men that we are or were eat redemption for dinner every damn day
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Then there is pathos
Asshole men that we are or were eat redemption for dinner every damn day
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16th Jun 2019 10:13pm
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11th Jun 2019 6:08pm
The confused emotion, pushing away before you may something might later regret or regret not saying.
Great write snugglebuck.
Great write snugglebuck.
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Re. WAKE UP!
13th Jun 2019 8:18am
Find her and tell her my dear. It's never too late. Just being hopeful for ya.
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16th Jun 2019 10:14pm
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22nd Jun 2019 00:21am
Its the hardest when you pretend nothing existed but reality isbtelling you otherwise. . But you got me thinking. . Is it possible to get laid without even feeling anything. . At all?!
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23rd Jun 2019 12:46pm
From my limited experience, the answer is 'no.'
I've always felt a connection even when I intended there not to be one.
I've always felt a connection even when I intended there not to be one.
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23rd Jun 2019 1:21pm
Haaaa, i knew it. Guys your kind still EXIST. Have a restful weekend buddy. Xxx
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