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Sun-shadowed
Silhouetted by light-traced form
around the window, behind the door-
she stands, her hand upon its knob
ready to turn, and yet she cannot.
It will not open, that solid trunk
safety net of former forest-
not by grasp nor pull, revealing
a living world beyond her being.
Anxiety, birthed from shade-
offers security of darkened wing.
Riddles life a haunting maze,
hand-feeds fear with doubt and lies.
Today, she will not face the truth-
in shadows safe and rumors loud.
Maybe tomorrow, or even next year-
or, maybe never, so it appears.
Yet, Love is faithful, standing strong
gently reminds, Take your time;
if we cannot overcome in Life
we most certainly will in Death.
Where shadows dare not exist
amid Source Energies of Truth.
~
Heaven_sent_Kathy
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Heaven_sent_Kathy/
Kathy is a very prolific writer who couples deep feeling with spirituality. Her writings reflect an astute observation of both a vulnerable self and family history. Her life line to the world is poetry, and her dedication to the craft is an inspiration to those who read her offerings of love and hope.
around the window, behind the door-
she stands, her hand upon its knob
ready to turn, and yet she cannot.
It will not open, that solid trunk
safety net of former forest-
not by grasp nor pull, revealing
a living world beyond her being.
Anxiety, birthed from shade-
offers security of darkened wing.
Riddles life a haunting maze,
hand-feeds fear with doubt and lies.
Today, she will not face the truth-
in shadows safe and rumors loud.
Maybe tomorrow, or even next year-
or, maybe never, so it appears.
Yet, Love is faithful, standing strong
gently reminds, Take your time;
if we cannot overcome in Life
we most certainly will in Death.
Where shadows dare not exist
amid Source Energies of Truth.
~
Heaven_sent_Kathy
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/Heaven_sent_Kathy/
Kathy is a very prolific writer who couples deep feeling with spirituality. Her writings reflect an astute observation of both a vulnerable self and family history. Her life line to the world is poetry, and her dedication to the craft is an inspiration to those who read her offerings of love and hope.
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 9th Jun 2019
Author's Note
Doppelgänger: the DUP Oscars - https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10840/
non-entry Avatars Amok Comp: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10839/
non-entry Avatars Amok Comp: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10839/
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Re. Sun-shadowed
Anonymous
9th Jun 2019 9:05pm
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11th Jun 2019 2:15pm
Re. Sun-shadowed
9th Jun 2019 9:39pm
You've done it for me - phew! - now I can move onto the next person on my list :))
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It has me want to follow through, to do a tribute too, and Sage’s is knowingly deep.
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9th Jun 2019 10:03pm
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11th Jun 2019 2:16pm
Re. Sun-shadowed
9th Jun 2019 9:40pm
“Love is faithful, standing strong
gently reminds, Take your time;
if we cannot overcome in Life
we most certainly will in Death.”
Total mood. I love this❤️
gently reminds, Take your time;
if we cannot overcome in Life
we most certainly will in Death.”
Total mood. I love this❤️
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Re: Re. Sun-shadowed
11th Jun 2019 2:16pm
Re. Sun-shadowed
Anonymous
9th Jun 2019 10:52pm
It is very touching tribute. The description of the door as a safety net is phenomenal.
A little light goes a long way in darkness, is a phrase I am fond off. May this poem be a light in Kathy's life showing her she is not alone; people are there to talk to, be a voice for her to follow out of the maze.
Bravo, Dear. 📝❤
A little light goes a long way in darkness, is a phrase I am fond off. May this poem be a light in Kathy's life showing her she is not alone; people are there to talk to, be a voice for her to follow out of the maze.
Bravo, Dear. 📝❤
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11th Jun 2019 2:17pm
Re. Sun-shadowed
Anonymous
10th Jun 2019 4:10pm
I like this one.
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11th Jun 2019 2:17pm
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10th Jun 2019 11:05pm
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11th Jun 2019 2:17pm
Re. Sun-shadowed
11th Jun 2019 1:00am
My dearest Ahavati - I've been away a number of days and missed out on all the excitement of the idea, plan, and now a challenge, to pay poetic tribute to other DU members. But when I came HERE - and saw this enlargement of my avatar, I jumped in amazement!
I'm so terribly honored that it has me almost in pain. I haven't enough words. I'll try to find more...
Kathy xo
I'm so terribly honored that it has me almost in pain. I haven't enough words. I'll try to find more...
Kathy xo
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Re: Re. Sun-shadowed
11th Jun 2019 2:18pm
You're more than welcome and most deserving, Kathy. xo
Words aren't necessary or expected. <3
Words aren't necessary or expected. <3
Re. Sun-shadowed
11th Jun 2019 11:11am
I like the theme of this, and the relation of the (wooden) door to the forest. Not quite sure about the word "knob" - this word seems to jar against the rest of the poem.
The safety net of the (closed) door also evokes the safety net of the forest, in that there is security and anonymity amongst the trees of a forest. The safety of the forest is present in the safety of the wooden door.
Delicate, the poem gently evokes a sense of someone in shadows (metaphorical and real), wanting to go forth, but afraid. Apart from the word "knob" - but that's just my taste.
I like the unusual ending, saying that what we cannot overcome in life, we can do in death, with the suggestion that love transcends death. This is my take on the poem.
The safety net of the (closed) door also evokes the safety net of the forest, in that there is security and anonymity amongst the trees of a forest. The safety of the forest is present in the safety of the wooden door.
Delicate, the poem gently evokes a sense of someone in shadows (metaphorical and real), wanting to go forth, but afraid. Apart from the word "knob" - but that's just my taste.
I like the unusual ending, saying that what we cannot overcome in life, we can do in death, with the suggestion that love transcends death. This is my take on the poem.
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Re: Re. Sun-shadowed
11th Jun 2019 2:14pm
Thank you, SeaCat. I actually agree with you on the knob; however, the more I thought about it, the more I realized it fit - as the knob is 3-dimensional, a protrusion between the flat safety net of the door and her hand. The more it stuck out, the more I liked it. Handle could've also worked ( especially with the double-entendre of tangible handle as well as getting a handle on things ), but it didn't have the same jarring effect.
I tried to imagine the bravery in approaching the door and the shock of touching the knob, unable to turn it. So I opted for knob as a bit of a disturbance that interrupts the flow of energy. Hope that makes sense.
Thanks again, and happy to see you back.
I tried to imagine the bravery in approaching the door and the shock of touching the knob, unable to turn it. So I opted for knob as a bit of a disturbance that interrupts the flow of energy. Hope that makes sense.
Thanks again, and happy to see you back.
Re: Re. Sun-shadowed
17th Jun 2019 4:47pm
Yes, it does make sense.
Handle would have been a worse choice of word, I think.
Knob, as you have explained it is a good word.
I am glad that I mentioned knob, because now I have a better appreciation and understanding of the poem.
Handle would have been a worse choice of word, I think.
Knob, as you have explained it is a good word.
I am glad that I mentioned knob, because now I have a better appreciation and understanding of the poem.
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12th Jun 2019 00:02am
Love always is.
Welcome back, Nemo. Here's hoping you focus solely on poetry vs people this go-round.
Welcome back, Nemo. Here's hoping you focus solely on poetry vs people this go-round.