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Sweet Tooth
He is my wicked impulsion, craving
his core; so salty & sweet
I glide from root to tip; yummy strokes
to my most decadent treat
I'm greedy when I'm hungry & to my
tongue, he's my preferred flavor
Enslaved to his pleasure, between my
lips, do I anticipate to savor
My tastebuds for him - so salacious,
he's my sweet little fixation
I lap him like candy & swallow, as I revel
in each euphoric sensation
his core; so salty & sweet
I glide from root to tip; yummy strokes
to my most decadent treat
I'm greedy when I'm hungry & to my
tongue, he's my preferred flavor
Enslaved to his pleasure, between my
lips, do I anticipate to savor
My tastebuds for him - so salacious,
he's my sweet little fixation
I lap him like candy & swallow, as I revel
in each euphoric sensation
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 9th Jun 2019
Author's Note
"Salacious" comp
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Re. Sweet Tooth
9th Jun 2019 5:11pm
Very hot write, and with that picture...well my mind will be busy for the rest of the day. Great work.
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9th Jun 2019 5:15pm
Heehee.. So glad to know that, but especially that you have something new....missed your writes & headed there now!
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9th Jun 2019 5:21pm
Thank you, busy life - sometimes poetry has to take a back seat I'm afraid. But I know I will always have something wonderful to read when I see you've written something 😊.
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9th Jun 2019 5:28pm
That's very understandable, not everyone gets to be a housewife.;) Thank you for the kindness & don't forget us!
Re. Sweet Tooth
9th Jun 2019 5:23pm
The heat keeps on coming... blazin ink PandoraUnleashed! This looks like a winner comp
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Re: Re. Sweet Tooth
9th Jun 2019 5:31pm
Thank you for humbling comment & add, Magic. It's most enjoyable for me, that you joined the family to crank it up in here yourself!!
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9th Jun 2019 5:47pm
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9th Jun 2019 5:49pm
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9th Jun 2019 6:07pm
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9th Jun 2019 6:35pm
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9th Jun 2019 9:21pm
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9th Jun 2019 7:24pm
beautiful Pandora this is intensely erotic
it drips heat...
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
it drips heat...
love you lady...
love Brenda 💕
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9th Jun 2019 9:22pm
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9th Jun 2019 8:44pm
What an entry! Good luck in the comp. Enslavement that dreams are made of.
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9th Jun 2019 9:20pm
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9th Jun 2019 9:34pm
Brava Pandora! Electric tingles course through my body causing a spontaneous standing ovation.
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9th Jun 2019 9:40pm
Anonymous
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9th Jun 2019 10:03pm
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Re: Re. Sweet Tooth
9th Jun 2019 11:08pm
Ah, thanks for the best comment yet for my humble work. Appreciate you HD!! ...owe ya for that add too
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9th Jun 2019 11:09pm
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9th Jun 2019 11:17pm
Thank you, dearest Crowfly. You don't know how happy I am that your presence is back! Big hugs!
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2019 5:04pm
Yup, just from the title I knew I was in trouble reading this at work. So I snuck a quick peek and bounced back when things got quiet. Damn, girl!
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11th Jun 2019 5:14am
Thanks for the love, Willow. I appreciate it! Please throw Miss Taryn a hug from me please. xx
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Anonymous
11th Jun 2019 12:06pm
Absolutely! And I know my Pod, she's gonna demand a return delivery of hugs! Hugs for ya both! :-)
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11th Jun 2019 5:16am
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Anonymous
12th Jun 2019 1:24am
Pandora.. nice erotic ink.. love your skills, as a writer.. lucky guy, this man you speak of? most definitely.. much love and respect..
Dave
Dave
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12th Jun 2019 2:09am
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15th Jun 2019 7:37pm
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15th Jun 2019 6:15pm
Wow, you are a sugarplum dream. Nice thought of being someone’s dessert. Visuals and description exquisite.
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15th Jun 2019 7:39pm
Re. Sweet Tooth
The picture is cool, it doesn’t hold a candle to your profile pic,
this is the best poem, smooth and silky just like your profile pic, I see her
this is the best poem, smooth and silky just like your profile pic, I see her
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15th Jun 2019 7:41pm
Aww, this is such a sweet compliment!! Thank you so very much...smiling;)
Re. Sweet Tooth
2nd Sep 2019 3:04am
Pandora, this is wicked good. You do naughty with the best. Love where this took me. :)
John
John
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3rd Sep 2019 8:03pm
John, I'm happy with wherever it did take you by all means! Thank you for embracing this naughty little piece with your add & inspiring words. It's not really one of my favorites, it's lacking my typical touch. With that it mind, I'm grateful you saw something..hugs!