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Love Songs🎶
( a rensaku of linked tanka )
love songs of the moon
carry silent memories
on these thin wires
to my heart that will woo me
of the midnight from my hair
🎼🎶
love sings sweetest ohm
tho’ moonlit in coldest wake
will kiss the pluck’d tines
retrace’ed in both my palms
the score of a melody
love songs of the moon
carry silent memories
on these thin wires
to my heart that will woo me
of the midnight from my hair
🎼🎶
love sings sweetest ohm
tho’ moonlit in coldest wake
will kiss the pluck’d tines
retrace’ed in both my palms
the score of a melody
Published 6th Jun 2019
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6th Jun 2019 2:47pm
6th Jun 2019 3:58pm
6th Jun 2019 2:50pm
That is one really cool looking pic!!
Selene has, for centuries, inspired romance in song and ink!
Selene has, for centuries, inspired romance in song and ink!
6th Jun 2019 4:10pm
6th Jun 2019 4:46pm
6th Jun 2019 4:55pm
Really? Oh good, cause the other one disappeared, and I like this one better too.👩🏻🎨
6th Jun 2019 3:12pm
6th Jun 2019 3:56pm
Thank you, Sage... when it comes to my short form, I’m especially honored.
6th Jun 2019 3:31pm
Ah Jade in her elements... Very peaceful in its night song,
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...
Tomcat
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful...
Tomcat
Thank you so much, my Tomcat. Being together this morning sharing the moonworks... much happiness.
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6th Jun 2019 6:16pm
7th Jun 2019 1:40am
Hello and thank you my friend, and yes, what a lovely idea! I’m glad you appreciate.
8th Jun 2019 6:01am
"You woo me until the sun comes up
And you say that you love me"
As I was reading this tune started in my head. Great write, great image captured in a poem.
And you say that you love me"
As I was reading this tune started in my head. Great write, great image captured in a poem.
8th Jun 2019 6:09am
Why thank you, Stanhoven, dear friend. How good it is to see you. I’m so glad that music came to you as you read the rensaku, bringing an additional dimension to the moon’s light.
8th Jun 2019 9:53pm
Being a musician the music is always spinning in my head and now so does the Moonlight Sonata, now to go pick up the guitar and play a few bars.
Christie McVie(Fleetwood Mac) is one of my favorite singers and not very often one see the word woo anymore
Christie McVie(Fleetwood Mac) is one of my favorite singers and not very often one see the word woo anymore
9th Jun 2019 1:35am
9th Jun 2019 3:52am
I post my music under the same name on soundcloud although the songs but one are sung by females I write all the lyrics and the music. Hope to release a CD soon.
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