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Push Button
Just her touch
Acts as a push button start
My body comes alive
Heart and mind race
She can see
The blush in my face
Arousal on auto-control
No over-ride
As I anticipate
My hands shake
My equilibrium wobbles
Brain light headed
Throat dry
Speech won't form.
I'm almost ill
From the expectation
She likes me.
This is happening
Stay tranquil
My fingertips
Are electric
As I touch
Her skin
As we embrace
She feels my slight tremors
Senses on overload
She transforms my energy
We are compatible
And now balanced
Acts as a push button start
My body comes alive
Heart and mind race
She can see
The blush in my face
Arousal on auto-control
No over-ride
As I anticipate
My hands shake
My equilibrium wobbles
Brain light headed
Throat dry
Speech won't form.
I'm almost ill
From the expectation
She likes me.
This is happening
Stay tranquil
My fingertips
Are electric
As I touch
Her skin
As we embrace
She feels my slight tremors
Senses on overload
She transforms my energy
We are compatible
And now balanced
Written by
DaVinci_07
(Leo)
Published 29th May 2019
| Edited 30th May 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
30th May 2019 00:11am
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30th May 2019 3:48am
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30th May 2019 5:48am
Love, is such a beautiful thing to behold, and you’ve captured that aptly in this write ! 😍😎🤩
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30th May 2019 8:04pm
Truly appreciate the kind words and encouragement from an accomplished writer as yourself. Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
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31st May 2019 1:54pm
You’re most welcome, and yes, it resonated with me for some reason.
Hmm. I’m not “accomplished” or published, however, thanks kindly for the compliment.
Hope you enjoy your weekend !
Hmm. I’m not “accomplished” or published, however, thanks kindly for the compliment.
Hope you enjoy your weekend !
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30th May 2019 6:02am
Oh my love this is simply a beautiful spill, please continue with your poetic ink stains
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30th May 2019 8:09pm
Wow, truly appreciated coming from a wonderful poetess and skilled writer / author as you are. Thanks for the continued encouragement. Always nice to get a compliment from sexy smart person as yourself.
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1st Jun 2019 1:05am
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31st May 2019 6:29pm
That united flutter makes the world turn 'round ♡ Beautifully expressed & a welcome sight from a mans perspective!
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1st Jun 2019 5:00am
Thank-you for reading and for your kind words. Truly appreciate your perspective too.
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27th Jun 2019 6:09pm
And you definitely balance the suggestive with the active
I like the vibe and rhythm
Really nice
I like the vibe and rhythm
Really nice
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Anonymous
24th Apr 2020 10:11pm
A beautiful expression of the excitement that occurs between a man and a woman. I liked it a lot.
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13th Nov 2020 6:10am
Fantastic spill! I really enjoyed this excellent poem. Thanks for sharing it!
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12th Feb 2023 11:56am
The 3rd stanza feels like breathing, very rhythmic.
I love that she levels you out and makes you feel even.
LJ
I love that she levels you out and makes you feel even.
LJ
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12th Feb 2023 1:28pm
Thanks LJ. Being balanced is much better than stumbling! : )
Happy Valentines in advance.
Happy Valentines in advance.