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Love in Atlantis
Forget New York City
London Venice or Paris
If you’re searching for love
You need visit Atlantis
Somewhere below the warm sea
Dwells a romantic metropolis
Where love blooms eternally
Within a protective acropolis
Where tender hearts never break
Despite the perils of passion
For fidelity still has a place
In this refuge of devotion
When I was shipwrecked sailor
I found true love in this city
After lovely aquatic angels
Appeared and rescued me
Then I fell with a particular
Pretty submariner cherub
But decided to resurface
To say goodbye to my parents
But alas, I could not find
My way back to Atlantis
Where my true love still waits
With loyalty and patience
So, when I finally come to pass
I am to be buried at sea
That I might return to Atlantis
Where my sweet angel waits for me
London Venice or Paris
If you’re searching for love
You need visit Atlantis
Somewhere below the warm sea
Dwells a romantic metropolis
Where love blooms eternally
Within a protective acropolis
Where tender hearts never break
Despite the perils of passion
For fidelity still has a place
In this refuge of devotion
When I was shipwrecked sailor
I found true love in this city
After lovely aquatic angels
Appeared and rescued me
Then I fell with a particular
Pretty submariner cherub
But decided to resurface
To say goodbye to my parents
But alas, I could not find
My way back to Atlantis
Where my true love still waits
With loyalty and patience
So, when I finally come to pass
I am to be buried at sea
That I might return to Atlantis
Where my sweet angel waits for me
Author's Note
My entry for AEMelia564 competition, shipwrecked.
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Re. Love in Atlantis
23rd May 2019 9:53pm
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Anonymous
23rd May 2019 10:21pm
Awwww That was a smooth read.

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24th May 2019 4:26am
Oh those gorgeous water babes in Atlantis are something else, that’s for sure !
An awesomely creative write, Snugglebuck...
An awesomely creative write, Snugglebuck...
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25th May 2019 7:12am
Love in Atlantis
26th May 2019 10:33pm
Hey, snuggle
Your piece captures the allure and mysteries of the (sub)marine world, where aquatic delights and fantasies breed images of mermaids and treasure chests. It is a trilogy of lost-and-found and hope that you shall cherish until death. What appeared at first to be your subplot has become the principal screenplay of this intriguing fantasy -- to find you way back to love, albeit in a Romeo-&-Juliet type afterlife reunion.
"Love in Atlantis" makes for great reading, after which it stirs the soul to contemplate life beyond death.
And that image is simply super.
Sincerely
cab
Your piece captures the allure and mysteries of the (sub)marine world, where aquatic delights and fantasies breed images of mermaids and treasure chests. It is a trilogy of lost-and-found and hope that you shall cherish until death. What appeared at first to be your subplot has become the principal screenplay of this intriguing fantasy -- to find you way back to love, albeit in a Romeo-&-Juliet type afterlife reunion.
"Love in Atlantis" makes for great reading, after which it stirs the soul to contemplate life beyond death.
And that image is simply super.
Sincerely
cab
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26th May 2019 10:47pm