Death Is A Pedophile

Oh yes, it is indeed.

This poem reflects sentiments from my own heart.  A sneaky pedophile is the perfect metaphor for cancer, a disease that always tip toes up to you from behind.

Great job.  Made my reading list.

Lost my mother to cancer  thanks for appreciating

dearest poet powerful poem
awesome metaphor...

love Brenda ❤

Thanks very much for appreciating

This feels like standing on the edge of a dangerous cliff and looking straight down to the unfathomable potential fall, I love how your writes do that, the title is chilling but I wanted to read it and understand..

The title itself packs a punch, as soon as it popped into my head  I knew I had something

Good luck in the comp :)

I won’t win, I just entered it to see if I could write within the parameters given, so the fact I did it makes it more important than winning to me at the moment

Such power behind these carefully distilled words! Very well written. I love how the title both makes you wary and intrigued - at least it did that for me. I was curious to see how this poem would turn out, and was pleasantly surprised.
Very strong!

Delanee.

damn this was dark....powerful...provoking...

Really incredible and gut punch, impactful.
The title is one of your best in my opinion, and completely grabs you by the balls, demanding attention... Then the 'meat and potatoes' of your poem, are just masterfully prepared! ... You're a born poet, through and through....

This whole piece, is brilliant.

🌹 - B
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