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I Dream Of Utopia
Humanity
No longer a child
Found the beauty
In existence
Where we breath
Pure perfection
In the love of animals
And ourselves
Living in harmony
On a healed planet
That now flourishes
Like flowers always did
Finally understanding
That technology ambition
Never need to ruin
But build an eternal paradise
No longer a child
Found the beauty
In existence
Where we breath
Pure perfection
In the love of animals
And ourselves
Living in harmony
On a healed planet
That now flourishes
Like flowers always did
Finally understanding
That technology ambition
Never need to ruin
But build an eternal paradise
Published 21st May 2019
Author's Note
Written for the Utopian Dream competition
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Anonymous
21st May 2019 1:55pm
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21st May 2019 2:30pm
21st May 2019 3:02pm
Thank you believe it or not it wrote itself in about 15 mins probably shows but I still like the result. Thanks for appreciating
21st May 2019 2:40pm
Just as science and religion can coexist - thus can organic with technological. Well done, AspergerPoet.
21st May 2019 3:00pm
21st May 2019 6:31pm
22nd May 2019 3:12pm
“Living in harmony
On a healed planet
That now flourishes
Like flowers always did“
I love the beauty and optimism in this... especially the aforementioned ~ 🔥🔥🔥
On a healed planet
That now flourishes
Like flowers always did“
I love the beauty and optimism in this... especially the aforementioned ~ 🔥🔥🔥
22nd May 2019 3:25pm
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
24th May 2019 4:19am
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