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Don't believe everything you think
One page writes,
Keeping it concise,
Precise penning ignites the night despite feeling quite uncertain
Ya dig?
~
The forlorn feelings follow me endlessly,
Producing panic within..
to think of you feeling so tormented..
so down
so out of it..
drowning in the darkness...
Not what I intended this piece to be about.
Emotions invoking madness, ever-changing.
Swimming in the swarming sadness..
I must not sink,
don't believe everything that ya think.
_
Don't believe
Everything you think.
Let that sink in your psyche before you nestle into the night.
Keeping it concise,
Precise penning ignites the night despite feeling quite uncertain
Ya dig?
~
The forlorn feelings follow me endlessly,
Producing panic within..
to think of you feeling so tormented..
so down
so out of it..
drowning in the darkness...
Not what I intended this piece to be about.
Emotions invoking madness, ever-changing.
Swimming in the swarming sadness..
I must not sink,
don't believe everything that ya think.
_
Don't believe
Everything you think.
Let that sink in your psyche before you nestle into the night.
Author's Note
“It’s the hardest thing in the world to go on being aware of someone else’s pain.” ― Pat Barker
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Don't believe everything you think
4th May 2019 8:05pm
Sometimes our mind plays a trick on us when doubts creep in. So yes better not to believe everything we think. Nice spill.
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Re: Re. Don't believe everything you think
10th May 2019 10:34pm
So true I let it get the best of me way too often
Appreciate your comment!🙏
Appreciate your comment!🙏
Re. Don't believe everything you think
4th May 2019 8:05pm
dearest Hunter beautiful understanding here
of another's torment...so tender...
love Brenda 💕
of another's torment...so tender...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. Don't believe everything you think
10th May 2019 10:35pm
Re. Don't believe everything you think
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4th May 2019 8:23pm
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10th May 2019 10:37pm
Re. Don't believe everything you think
4th May 2019 8:36pm
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10th May 2019 10:39pm
Re. Don't believe everything you think
5th May 2019 1:28am
Excellent contact, Hunter. Believing everything you think too often leads to suicidal thoughts. I have often counseled others to protect their heart ( and those whom they love ) from their thoughts.
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Re: Re. Don't believe everything you think
10th May 2019 11:11pm
So true in my case it's more about my father's situation and the pain he is going through
That's so wonderful and kind of you to help people in that way
You're truly an amazing person with such a beautiful soul
Appreciate you Ahavati!
That's so wonderful and kind of you to help people in that way
You're truly an amazing person with such a beautiful soul
Appreciate you Ahavati!
Re. Don't believe everything you think
5th May 2019 3:24am
Re: Re. Don't believe everything you think
11th May 2019 00:11am
Re. Don't believe everything you think
5th May 2019 6:14am
I dig, Dude...
that's the thing about poetry...
it sneaks up when you're not looking...hugs, MrH...this is normal I think
your poem just ran away with you... she-he-it happens...Ely
that's the thing about poetry...
it sneaks up when you're not looking...hugs, MrH...this is normal I think
your poem just ran away with you... she-he-it happens...Ely
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Re: Re. Don't believe everything you think
11th May 2019 00:16am
Re. Don't believe everything you think
5th May 2019 11:16pm
Re: Re. Don't believe everything you think
11th May 2019 00:17am
Re. Don't believe everything you think
11th May 2019 4:54am
Re: Re. Don't believe everything you think
11th May 2019 5:03pm
True not many do sometimes I see it as a gift and sometimes I see it as a curse lol
Thanks for reading man!
Thanks for reading man!