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Bailiwick
For some, it has become
a game, You know.
Potential Lovers
playing, flirting Fun
shattering hearts
one by one
unrequited
pining
disquieted
sighing
lying
It’s a silly game.
I might tell You
I love You forever;
but I am not forever
in this corporeal vessel.
All I have is our “now”
so I will love You
today and every “today”
until we run out of
“todays.”
We became out of our
need for intimacy.
For us,
it’s not a game;
we are too old
for that type of shit.
For others,
it’s still a game
a silly confusing game.
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Re. Bailiwick
Anonymous
3rd May 2019 5:30pm
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3rd May 2019 5:35pm
Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 5:38pm
I like your way of seeing things dearest Tallen
I don't like games
I play to win...
because a heart is too precious to lose on a long shot...
beautiful write...
love Brenda 💕
I don't like games
I play to win...
because a heart is too precious to lose on a long shot...
beautiful write...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 5:45pm
Agree Beautiful
when i enter an intimate relationship (even if an LDR)
i am all in..........100%
happy this resonates
thank You for the kind share
when i enter an intimate relationship (even if an LDR)
i am all in..........100%
happy this resonates
thank You for the kind share
Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 5:48pm
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3rd May 2019 5:53pm
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3rd May 2019 5:55pm
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3rd May 2019 5:58pm
unfortunately so
youths who really never grew up
or learned from their experiences
youths who really never grew up
or learned from their experiences
Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 5:57pm
It's amazing how many 'adults' play games, Tallen. The difference is the ones who walk away vs becoming embroiled in the drama.
Good poem.
Good poem.
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Re: Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 6:08pm
2 things i abhor:
Drama
& Gossip
I don't engage in either (online or IRL)
I just stay in the backdrop and watch and listen
thank You for reading and sharing
Drama
& Gossip
I don't engage in either (online or IRL)
I just stay in the backdrop and watch and listen
thank You for reading and sharing
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
3rd May 2019 6:02pm
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3rd May 2019 6:14pm
Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 6:08pm
cool then maybe someone should put real effort games....other people are just trying to live their lives.
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Re: Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 6:14pm
People don't need the games
in any relationship -- be it romantic or casual friendship.
I mean, What's the point?
appreciate You stopping by to read
and comment -- thank You
in any relationship -- be it romantic or casual friendship.
I mean, What's the point?
appreciate You stopping by to read
and comment -- thank You
Bailiwick
Hi, Tallen
This skinny-looking little piece tells a big tale of the unaffordability of game risk. It reminds me of the Joe South song, "Games People Play" (https://youtu.be/jpJWobClMf0).
As the wives of Russian roulette victims sing, "One of us will weep tonight, one of us won't sleep tonight..."
NO wonder you hate (like I do)
"a game"
"a silly game"
"a silly confusing game"!
(Increasing intensity well portrayed.)
cab
This skinny-looking little piece tells a big tale of the unaffordability of game risk. It reminds me of the Joe South song, "Games People Play" (https://youtu.be/jpJWobClMf0).
As the wives of Russian roulette victims sing, "One of us will weep tonight, one of us won't sleep tonight..."
NO wonder you hate (like I do)
"a game"
"a silly game"
"a silly confusing game"!
(Increasing intensity well portrayed.)
cab
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Re: Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 7:15pm
I remember hearing that song on radio stations
growing up.
thank You for the wonderful thoughts, Brother
growing up.
thank You for the wonderful thoughts, Brother
Re. Bailiwick
Life's too short for games - even more so the older you get. Comfort zones can shrink in a good way too - cutting out the bull-shit. Nicely penned. Josh.
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3rd May 2019 7:17pm
ESPECIALLY when older!
Agree with You about the comfort zone shrinkage, as well.
appreciate the share and kind praise
Agree with You about the comfort zone shrinkage, as well.
appreciate the share and kind praise
Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 6:58pm
Well said Tallen. I know what you mean. It's tragic when, in unawareness, we reach out to others for the wholeness that must be found in love of self, which then radiates true non grasping love to others. I've been guilty of this myself not even long ago, but endeavor to grow. 🙏💖
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Re: Re. Bailiwick
3rd May 2019 7:19pm
There's always room for growth, Brother
thank You for sharing Your thoughts with me
thank You for sharing Your thoughts with me
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3rd May 2019 8:06pm
Re. Bailiwick
Anonymous
3rd May 2019 10:04pm
That’s good stuff right there !!!
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3rd May 2019 10:07pm
Anonymous
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4th May 2019 8:20pm
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4th May 2019 11:39pm
Many have not experienced or had REAL love modeled for them growing up and so
they only know what they know.
It's why i choose to be KIND in all things
because if i haven't learned a behaviour (i did grow up a wee bit abused)
then at least i know i am kind and maybe the potential lover will be attracted to the kindness and stick with me and help me learn.
they only know what they know.
It's why i choose to be KIND in all things
because if i haven't learned a behaviour (i did grow up a wee bit abused)
then at least i know i am kind and maybe the potential lover will be attracted to the kindness and stick with me and help me learn.
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4th May 2019 8:38pm
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4th May 2019 11:41pm
No need to weep for me
my (new) Love
understands
accepts
and loves me -----we are transparent and intimate
Hope the resonance for You has opened Your heart
thank You for the kind comments
Honored for the RL add
my (new) Love
understands
accepts
and loves me -----we are transparent and intimate
Hope the resonance for You has opened Your heart
thank You for the kind comments
Honored for the RL add
Re. Bailiwick
6th May 2019 10:01pm
Your writing makes me think and also makes me feel guilty. My “affair” is only in my mind and poems currently. But I still have guilt and desire at once.
Its a good poem .
Its a good poem .
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Re: Re. Bailiwick
6th May 2019 10:07pm
Is that not what spilled ink on paper
or in the smoky halls of underground clubs' stages
all about?
Shit to make us take a pause ...........& think
Appreciate Your thoughtful comments
and kind praise
or in the smoky halls of underground clubs' stages
all about?
Shit to make us take a pause ...........& think
Appreciate Your thoughtful comments
and kind praise
Re. Bailiwick
8th May 2019 2:19am
The games people play eh...sad
I have been part of games in the past even played a few myself...the pains of growing up...as one gets older I find priorties change etc. I have no time for that in my life now...found love again and she is a beautiful soul...fuck them let them have there silly games they always lose in the end anyways
I have been part of games in the past even played a few myself...the pains of growing up...as one gets older I find priorties change etc. I have no time for that in my life now...found love again and she is a beautiful soul...fuck them let them have there silly games they always lose in the end anyways
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Re: Re. Bailiwick
8th May 2019 4:05am
i confess i played games in my youth.
as more experience i gained i learned and learned
game hurt people a lot.
and the older we get
the less games we enjoy or endure as time is no longer on our side
appreciate the read and share
as more experience i gained i learned and learned
game hurt people a lot.
and the older we get
the less games we enjoy or endure as time is no longer on our side
appreciate the read and share