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cruelty is its own master
fuck cruelly twisting from your knife of afterthought
I will spin my own tale of escape
you're addicted to me now
wicked turn of events in the poetic soap opera
and all the hens cluck in the peanut gallery
cunt blocked and used
I spit words of rebellion
carving out my rage
pain won't be my undoing
it will make me in the end
my tongue razor sharp
is fine-tuned to bring out the truth
in myself as well as others
I let it tear into me in hopes it will free me
gangrene has set in
necrosis of the truest love
I vow to see it to the bitter end
distractions come and go
they've even turned my head
I realize now no one will love me as my man does
so don't look to me for your happy ending
living together in some kind of ignorant bliss
cos I can't see me without him darlin
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Re. cruelty is its own master
2nd May 2019 10:40pm
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 1:29pm
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3rd May 2019 1:29pm
Re. cruelty is its own master
2nd May 2019 11:21pm
Holy fucking hell yes! Touche' baby....tell em! Truth hurts like a bitch but it ain't your problem.💙
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 1:30pm
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora love your response to this write...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
4th May 2019 7:15am
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
4th May 2019 7:19am
aw beautiful one thank you such is life you know bad times and good alike...I'm grateful people embraced me home like I never left...
you're beautiful to me 🌹
you're beautiful to me 🌹
Re. cruelty is its own master
2nd May 2019 11:42pm
say it again, love
"distractions come and go
they've even turned my head
I realize now no one will love me as my man does "
truth hurts but is undeniable when all is said and done
"distractions come and go
they've even turned my head
I realize now no one will love me as my man does "
truth hurts but is undeniable when all is said and done
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 1:31pm
thank you graciously beautiful one yes I must stay focused on what's important to me... amen...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda 💕
Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 00:47am
Damn! This is some powerful introspective ink Brenda. BRAVO!!!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 1:32pm
thank you graciously dearest Harry I'm honored by the add and wonderful comment...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 1:33pm
thank you graciously dearest HF for such a fantastic response to this write... you gave me big smiles...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 1:57am
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 1:28pm
thank you graciously dearest Poet you know I always have a big smile on my face when you visit my pages even after all these years you just affect me like that...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 2:13pm
I'm honored Brenda
You bring it and sometimes I just gotta have a dose of you ...
Fire
Lust
Agony
Cunt poems
Joy !!!
You bring it and sometimes I just gotta have a dose of you ...
Fire
Lust
Agony
Cunt poems
Joy !!!
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3rd May 2019 2:22pm
Re. cruelty is its own master
3rd May 2019 3:14am
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3rd May 2019 1:34pm
Re. cruelty is its own master
6th May 2019 10:18pm
Funny how we let distractions pull us away from what's right in front of us. I pray your love for one another stays focused on each other.
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Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 9:55pm
When all is said and done who we love want and desire no matter what else we have get or are offered, we don't know what we have lost until its gone...…. also if the person we love leaves nobody or nothing can ever replace them so should never look for that, look for a new beginning something different to feel and love.
you have this effect on me every single time truly wondrous.
you have this effect on me every single time truly wondrous.
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 10:07pm
thank you dearest poet from my heart you're right I will always love this man...as you know reading me we're heading for divorce...I will not seek to replace him that's not possible hopefully I will be open to start a new journey with someone perhaps he took me as far as he could go...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 10:27pm
its never possible to have that same love and sooner people realise that the sooner they can move on, yes it takes time of course but every journey starts with one step, so that's it one step at a time to a new beginning, there is no rush it will happen when it happens, just like my journey that brought me here to DU.
Now I am on a new journey a new path and seriously from bottom of my heart I thank you
Now I am on a new journey a new path and seriously from bottom of my heart I thank you
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 10:30pm
it's ironic I'm on the welcoming group here... some poets come in and naturally drawn by me here you will find so many minds of pure gold...we will journey together and when the day comes and you find yourself lusting another no guilt is allowed with me
I am captivated by a person's artistry...
we're going to have fun you and me ❤
I am captivated by a person's artistry...
we're going to have fun you and me ❤
Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 10:51pm
I look forward to the journey the not knowing where I will go but that is a great and wonderful feeling, I have my inner demons I have my issues as we all do, I will say this I look forward to meeting a few others like raven lucy and I am so intrigued by it and how now after such a long time of feeling lost, there is light if only a spec when there was none.
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:05pm
I'm so happy I helped you feel at home here... you made me feel loved and appreciated...after a while the same people expect greater and greater from you when you are just a mortal...
thank you for the love sincerely...
Brenda 🌹
thank you for the love sincerely...
Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:13pm
Dear Brenda,
I expect nothing from you, you have already given me so much, we are only mortal and I told you before I am not going anywhere, I appreciate your works how in so many I have felt them all wanted it all desired it all and I love it all,
Oh and yes I am still giving you that lOOk
I expect nothing from you, you have already given me so much, we are only mortal and I told you before I am not going anywhere, I appreciate your works how in so many I have felt them all wanted it all desired it all and I love it all,
Oh and yes I am still giving you that lOOk
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:21pm
giggles you make me smile I am shiny and brand new forgive me for thinking you will see me too without my luster... hold tight it's going to be a wild ride...into the dark hunting the light digging inside yourself for your truest feelings... I promise to be here as you take your baby steps then evolving into Mastery...it's a race tag your it follow the leader were going inside the outside everything my seem upside down for a while...it will be fine in the end ❤
Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:30pm
I don't know what you think if you lose your luster I don't know if that's possible, I am still going nowhere not now not ever and im following and still giving you the look.
I am not scared of the journey excited and don't care what it feels like if its upside down back to front inside out, hell im wanting the wild ride
I am not scared of the journey excited and don't care what it feels like if its upside down back to front inside out, hell im wanting the wild ride
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:36pm
Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:40pm
As long as your here to help me and also on the wild ride or are you the wild ride, sorry can I say that
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Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:43pm
giggles say whatever you want yes reading me can be a wild ride but there are so many beautiful poets here you're just waiting in the entry way come on in and say whatever you like if I don't like it I promise to write you a poem lol 🌹
Re: Re. cruelty is its own master
7th Jul 2019 11:57pm
I may be only just entering but I am going to delve deeper not only here but into my soul, oh and SoulzGirl69 she wrote a poem inspired by me and I was touched something I had said about this being my home.
Crimsin you are truly a genius a truly beautiful soul and thank you for taking time with me I appreciate it and I am going to enjoy this wild ride and afterwards hope that I can be even a fraction of the writer you are then I would be very happy man...
Crimsin you are truly a genius a truly beautiful soul and thank you for taking time with me I appreciate it and I am going to enjoy this wild ride and afterwards hope that I can be even a fraction of the writer you are then I would be very happy man...
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