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the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
We're setting fires in souls, that's what we poets do
Arsonists with flammable words, burning bridges, igniting worlds.
From our catastrophic pen
we bring forth universes of all our love and pain
We're never quite the same.
the heart of a poet is in their artistry
we burn with the need to touch each other
interlaced words infused with emotion
we fall hard for one another
a subtle verse caressing us in the aether
we feel each other so intimately
I've hurt hearts and been broken by words
tongue of fire licking your darkness
enflaming you...yes I know...I feel you too
that's what we do to each other
my tongue sometimes a switchblade
a warrior I come out slicing and dicing
with an intensity that scares even me
we feel things so fiercely here in the underground
pagans ritualistic in rites to the dead gods of poetry
anything for a killer line
we ache to connect with you deeply
come one and all you are cordially invited to spill your guts
a den for the semi-neurotic sometimes psychotic
we welcome both your light and your dark art
we promise not to burn you at the stake for it
though we can't promise not to break your hearts lovely one
this is the nature of the unveiling of one's soul
it was made for the burning, yearning turmoil of it all
Author's Note
a beautiful Sky_dancer collaboration thank you lovely one for creating with me 🌹
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Re. the unveiled soul
Anonymous
2nd May 2019 9:05pm
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Re: Re. the unveiled soul
2nd May 2019 9:10pm
thank you beautiful one I thought it fit with the vibe and title of the write...
I love creating with you we need to do it again when the time is right...
love Brenda 🌹
I love creating with you we need to do it again when the time is right...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the unveiled soul
Anonymous
2nd May 2019 9:41pm
I think this
should be pub`ed
in the DU Welcome Party
Group...anyhow, my Ally in Darkness,
an excellent collab with Miss Sky;
look forward to more... love ya, Lady
~Devlin

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Re: Re. the unveiled soul
2nd May 2019 9:42pm
what a wonderful idea my beautiful Queen I'll see what I can do... thank you most graciously from us both...
love you lady...
Brenda 🌹
love you lady...
Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
2nd May 2019 10:16pm
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2nd May 2019 10:18pm
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Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
2nd May 2019 11:31pm
Great job, you two. Watch out with Sky...she's been mastering that damn pen in your absence!
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Re: Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
3rd May 2019 1:22pm
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora from us both... we had actually completed this before I went on break but the climate of the place was such it wasn't the right time to post it and I know I've been paying attention even while I was gone she's on fire...
I deeply appreciate you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
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3rd May 2019 00:40am
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Re: Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
3rd May 2019 1:23pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest HF yes we burn here in the underground for sure... I'm happy this spoke to you...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
3rd May 2019 4:54am
Your opening lines caused a Cheshire grin to spread from ear to ear because I was thinking before I opened it, "These two in tandem is going to be incendiary." And lo, there it is. I do so love being right, which is something I need to work on as a *cough*terrible*cough* Buddhist. Haha. Omg ladies, you're burning down the house with your heat lightning! I love it!
How interesting the universe aligns. Yelluw_Always and I are writing a collaboration tonight. Will post whenever she finishes her bits and welds them to mine.
Daniel
How interesting the universe aligns. Yelluw_Always and I are writing a collaboration tonight. Will post whenever she finishes her bits and welds them to mine.
Daniel
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Re: Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
3rd May 2019 1:24pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest Daniel those killer opening lines are beautiful Sky's she just rocked it...
I'm happy you enjoyed this write so much your comment gave me big smiles... I can't wait to see your and Hailey's collab...
love Brenda ❤
I'm happy you enjoyed this write so much your comment gave me big smiles... I can't wait to see your and Hailey's collab...
love Brenda ❤
Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
3rd May 2019 12:26pm
A humungously good collab - congrats to both.
"come one and all you are cordially invited to spill your guts"
... ahem ... are you sure about this? (Of course you are!) :))
I agree with Devlin's comment. Perhaps there should be a page of 3 or 4 inspiring welcome poems to open the minds for those new to DUP.
"come one and all you are cordially invited to spill your guts"
... ahem ... are you sure about this? (Of course you are!) :))
I agree with Devlin's comment. Perhaps there should be a page of 3 or 4 inspiring welcome poems to open the minds for those new to DUP.
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Re: Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
3rd May 2019 1:26pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest Josh giggles yes of course feel free spill um lol...
I'm happy you enjoyed this..,I did put this in the welcome group I agree Devlin's idea was a good one...
love Brenda 🌹
I'm happy you enjoyed this..,I did put this in the welcome group I agree Devlin's idea was a good one...
love Brenda 🌹
Re. the unveiled soul~with the beautiful Sky_dancer
Anonymous
4th May 2019 1:10pm
Awesome !

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