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Trust II
Don't like to be rushed
forced or coerced
a mind that is hushed
closed
but
exposed for its flaws
give me peace or give me death
to live in each breath
and the beauty of all
the mountains gaze your view
and the hottness overcomes
from the words
dripping from a lustful smile
I don't waver
as the flag flies high
salute me if you must
when you stand
only stand for trust
forced or coerced
a mind that is hushed
closed
but
exposed for its flaws
give me peace or give me death
to live in each breath
and the beauty of all
the mountains gaze your view
and the hottness overcomes
from the words
dripping from a lustful smile
I don't waver
as the flag flies high
salute me if you must
when you stand
only stand for trust
Published 1st May 2019
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1st May 2019 2:52pm
1st May 2019 8:15pm
Don't like to be rushed
forced or coerced
That right there, Tim. Couldn't agree more. The harder someone attempts to shove their way into my life - the firmer I stand against them. No one has the right to push themselves into another's life. On the contrary - everyone has the right to live their own life as they choose. The third stanza reinforces that perfectly.
Powerful poem and words to live by.
forced or coerced
That right there, Tim. Couldn't agree more. The harder someone attempts to shove their way into my life - the firmer I stand against them. No one has the right to push themselves into another's life. On the contrary - everyone has the right to live their own life as they choose. The third stanza reinforces that perfectly.
Powerful poem and words to live by.
1st May 2019 8:15pm
Anonymous
1st May 2019 3:18pm
Yours are always lines that carry extra weight. Peeling back layers and enjoying the full view of it. And those last three lines seal the poem perfectly.
1st May 2019 8:16pm
1st May 2019 9:00pm
"Give me peace or give me death" is the line that resonates with me. I can do without the turmoil. Excellent write.
1st May 2019 10:26pm
2nd May 2019 5:44am
2nd May 2019 6:13am
2nd May 2019 5:53pm
so true.. .because without what is there?
I absorbed this during a critical time in life
through a friend
I absorbed this during a critical time in life
through a friend
2nd May 2019 5:55pm
