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Anew
Cast before oceans countenance
I lay upon grit and grain
O'r flesh, tides pull in transcendence
As waters of brine balm my souls distain
Serenade me , sweet singing azure
Blessed is your eternal roaring sound
Your currents soothe as they shatter shore
To heavens, my gracious praise resounds
Your essence gently cleanses as it quells
As your flow will surge on infinitely
May your peace, within me, forever dwell
Laid anew on sands of tranquility
Under curtains of blue skies, soul shall rise
Healed by oceans transcending tides
I lay upon grit and grain
O'r flesh, tides pull in transcendence
As waters of brine balm my souls distain
Serenade me , sweet singing azure
Blessed is your eternal roaring sound
Your currents soothe as they shatter shore
To heavens, my gracious praise resounds
Your essence gently cleanses as it quells
As your flow will surge on infinitely
May your peace, within me, forever dwell
Laid anew on sands of tranquility
Under curtains of blue skies, soul shall rise
Healed by oceans transcending tides
Published 29th Apr 2019
Author's Note
My 1st semi ok sonnet I believe I served some justice. Haha...could be wrong 🤔
I'm still here apologizing for my absence to posts & pm's too. I'm getting settled in, finally at home now! 😘
I'm still here apologizing for my absence to posts & pm's too. I'm getting settled in, finally at home now! 😘
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
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1st May 2019 4:30am
You freaking know how to flatter me so. I'm so humble & gracious. It's a good feeling to have a sonnet finally get praise too..
30th Apr 2019 1:52am
Fabulous write pandy!! Absolutely lovely stuff👏👏 I've missed your words! Apologies for my absence as well!
Thank you Hunter! Your absence was noted so welcome back. Im also glad you were "washed anew".
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- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
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1st May 2019 4:37am
Thank you. I'm just not getting resettled & come check you out in my homeplace of the erotic genre. Can't wait! I've skimmed briefly to kmow!😄
30th Apr 2019 4:07am
What a serene ink stain my sweet poetess, your works of art always feel so soft to the mind
1st May 2019 4:39am
Thank you graciously, Goddess Kitty. Such a lulling compliment to my soul. Bless you, pen sister ♡
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30th Apr 2019 6:46am
Agree with comments about the restorative power of tides when listened too and stayed in.
1st May 2019 4:41am
30th Apr 2019 10:42am
Home sweet home 😁 wonderful to hear. Really enjoyed this poem. Was inked perfectly.
1st May 2019 4:43am
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
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1st May 2019 3:12am
i just saw this here is what come to my mind so many things could be read in this all I see is
pure of heart and soul and just one BEAUTIFUL WRITE
pure of heart and soul and just one BEAUTIFUL WRITE
1st May 2019 4:50am
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1st May 2019 4:54am
Your comment stoked my night, Ahavati. You're such a sweetheart. Thank you for t he encouragement, & add. I'm humbled me ao
1st May 2019 4:58am
While I love freeverse, I also love a good form. It's the preservation of the old ways. LOL!
1st May 2019 11:17pm
