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Passion Erupts
You came out from the clouds
caressing the wind
warmed up the cold
letting excitement dive in
you straddled my lap
giving
a long hot lingering kiss
electric moments seduced
truly time not remiss
the stars lit for you
showing my way
not knowing of night
or deference of day
peace held the brush
enchantment was cupped
blossoms were sprung
as pure passion erupts
caressing the wind
warmed up the cold
letting excitement dive in
you straddled my lap
giving
a long hot lingering kiss
electric moments seduced
truly time not remiss
the stars lit for you
showing my way
not knowing of night
or deference of day
peace held the brush
enchantment was cupped
blossoms were sprung
as pure passion erupts
Published 27th Apr 2019
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27th Apr 2019 2:50pm
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27th Apr 2019 3:18pm
Passion, is most certainly the elixir to managing the balancing act of this thing called life, in peace !
Just, gorgeous...
Just, gorgeous...
27th Apr 2019 8:29pm
27th Apr 2019 4:21pm
27th Apr 2019 8:30pm
Hmmmm Tim, sounds like you're smitten with this one! You're passion definatly shines here.
-Minxy❣
-Minxy❣
27th Apr 2019 8:31pm
Anonymous
27th Apr 2019 6:18pm
loved the flow of this piece;
if only Arizona gave this
much inspiration;(
*liked very much*
~Devlin
27th Apr 2019 8:32pm
I'm sure there are some beautiful desert roses and the mountains are exquisite. Thanks Dev
27th Apr 2019 6:48pm
Based on this and other spills
it looks as though You have found a muse
and You are poetically smitten
it looks as though You have found a muse
and You are poetically smitten
27th Apr 2019 8:33pm
Thanks T, love and nature has always been my muse....it just shines more on some days than others.
27th Apr 2019 7:33pm
27th Apr 2019 8:33pm
27th Apr 2019 7:48pm
Wow saucy and sensational exploding in poetic way !! Awesomely rhymed as well. Kudos!
Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
Pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 4:17pm
Ooof! That's a potent piece...all manner of romance and sensuality lacing those lines
29th Apr 2019 4:41pm
