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Half Of What I Say
‘Half of what I say is meaningless’
will become a chant, my mantra
to everything beyond what I can
express when in total happiness
or abject misery, and anything
between. For I am meant to be a
lowly soul, even in the highest of
his ethereal temple. That I may
then pass through at every level
from my belly, without arms and
legs like the worm I have become
in this life. I will serve the Lord’s
purpose in his own interests, for
the best of plans; not just for me,
but including me in his love, in a
divine future. For a worm is also
servant that works gladly for the
cultivation for the good of God’s
message. Showing me as I rest,
a message half-meaningless may
bring him the other half whole.
#KahlilGibran
"Half of what I say is meaningless”
is from Kahlil Gibran's
"Sand and Foam" (1926)
in which the full verse reads,
"Half of what I say is meaningless,
but l say it so that the other half
may reach you".
NaPoGloPoWriMo 2019
Written by
Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 20th Apr 2019
| Edited 30th Apr 2019
Author's Note
Entered in the competition “Pillars of the Temple” : Tribute to Kahlil Gibran.
Day Twenty-one of Thirty
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Day Twenty-one of Thirty
•unique words: 91
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21st Apr 2019 2:53am
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21st Apr 2019 3:27am
Oh gosh, thank you so much, dear EmilyRose, I’m very touched by your words of consideration. I hope my poem ( a prose poem ) will inspire. x
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21st Apr 2019 3:34am
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21st Apr 2019 12:29pm
That sheds some vital and interesting new depth on the new-age saying of 'the universe meets you half way'. Like it.
{not heard of that Gibran quote before - thank you for the introduction}
{not heard of that Gibran quote before - thank you for the introduction}
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21st Apr 2019 3:42pm
Thank you, Josh, for your considerate words.
And actually, you might have heard a slightly altered version of the quote, if you ever listened to John Lennon’s song ‘Julia’ ( The White Album, 1968 ) where he opens with:
“Half of what I say is meaningless,
But I say it just to reach you...”
The Beatles knew Gibran.
And actually, you might have heard a slightly altered version of the quote, if you ever listened to John Lennon’s song ‘Julia’ ( The White Album, 1968 ) where he opens with:
“Half of what I say is meaningless,
But I say it just to reach you...”
The Beatles knew Gibran.
Re: Re. Half Of What I Say
21st Apr 2019 5:37pm
I probably did hear the words on The White Album, but obviously did not really 'hear' them. Will listen more carefully in future :))
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21st Apr 2019 11:07pm
Beautiful Miss Jade. This touched me on a vibrational wavelength I find familiar. It is action and effort that makes waves. If even a tenth or less of what we did was meaningful, it would be worth it.
Daniel
Daniel
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Thank you graciously, Daniel. Your always generous words can, at times even, be consoling. A confirmation, a vindication.
I’m grateful the way you felt this one.
Jade🙏🏻
I’m grateful the way you felt this one.
Jade🙏🏻
Re. Half Of What I Say
22nd Apr 2019 3:42pm
This is masterful, a poem worthy of Gibran himself . I wonder is he's reading it now thinking, "I wish I'd written that!" such amazing, restrained precision! Love it!
tommy
tommy
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30th Apr 2019 00:47am
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30th Apr 2019 00:33am
Jade, this was such a moving write was just admit, it has taken weeks to digest it.
I must admit, 'Sand and Foam' is not one of favorite poems Kahlil's works. In fact, I his rambling to border on a diatribe.
But I felt the emotions of 'Half of What I Say' deep inside me. Your acceptance of destiny and your resolve to move forward despite it has moved my heart in ways I can't explain, for I can't completely under it. Consequently, in my opinion, your soul bearing write made Kahlil's look inferior.
What more can I say?
I must admit, 'Sand and Foam' is not one of favorite poems Kahlil's works. In fact, I his rambling to border on a diatribe.
But I felt the emotions of 'Half of What I Say' deep inside me. Your acceptance of destiny and your resolve to move forward despite it has moved my heart in ways I can't explain, for I can't completely under it. Consequently, in my opinion, your soul bearing write made Kahlil's look inferior.
What more can I say?
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Oh dear Kimmy... thank you for letting me know your heart’s express. I would never have been able to know if you hadn’t said so.
What more can you say is all that you have already said to me.🙏🏻
What more can you say is all that you have already said to me.🙏🏻
Re. Half Of What I Say
11th May 2019 1:04pm
Ahh!! So thought provoking & equally refreshing. Not many dare to speak of the almighty like that these days. No matter what we call him, the god or the universe, he lives within us. Showing us the path to enlightenment. We just need to open our eyes. For every little step we take towards him we understand the world more. Great ink, my dear friend.
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11th May 2019 1:14pm
Mahmudul, my friend, for this now you do truly honor me, a poor humble soul who feels inspired and is fortunate enough to translate vibrations - the currents of air, and of the earth’s music from its constant rotation/ orbit.
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11th May 2019 1:18pm
Maybe we are all insignificant drops of water in a ocean. But, what we do is what makes us special. And through your writings you have become special. Telling the secrets of mind is no easy task after all.
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If a poet has learned to listen & become atuned to the celestial bandwidth that runs through every element in our surroundings & ourselves, the ability is no longer a labor or a task, but a harmony sung in the writing.
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11th May 2019 1:37pm
Being humble is one of those things that make you great poet too. Bless you, my dear friend.
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11th May 2019 1:45pm