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April in Rockhollow
Title: April in Rockhollow
One of Thirty
Unique words: Eighty-eight
#NaPoWriMo2019
The gate is open, great tits sing within,
hidden in branches of Apple and Cherry,
a blossom such unblemished white is not to be missed,
in the shelter of this sunken garden.
You can admire small tadpoles at the edges of our pool,
or bumblebees with heads sunk into Aubrietia,
see an odd butterfly resting on the dandelion speckled lawn
as a scared squirrel dashes by.
Forget me nots and nigella are carefully seeded in cracks in old paths,
ending with tulips that grow taller in terracotta pots.
In truth, my day passes gay and much faster
with spade and pair of boots and aperitif as an afternoon reward.
Written by
ImperfectedStone
(The Gardener)
Published 1st Apr 2019
| Edited 2nd Apr 2019
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Re. April in Rockhollow
1st Apr 2019 11:04am
Oohhh Poppy, your nature writes like this one, for me, are always sublime, taking me back to my days in my gardens when I had gardens.
A beautiful walk in dappled English sunlight with you as the NaPo begins.🌻
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A beautiful walk in dappled English sunlight with you as the NaPo begins.🌻
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Re: Re. April in Rockhollow
2nd Apr 2019 8:05am
Jade, thank you - felt all a fluster yesterday but in the swing now. Looking forward to leading you through my patch. Love and light.
Re. April in Rockhollow
1st Apr 2019 11:23am
That gives me the urge to start my spring planting. A beautiful walk thru nature
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2nd Apr 2019 8:06am
I have radishes, peas, tomatoes and beans on the grow already. I highly recommend it, so therapeutic. Love and light.
Re. April in Rockhollow
1st Apr 2019 11:52am
snap. you shot the season with impeccable accuracy in words
you remind me of someone who does the same.
nature. snap. amazing job P.
you remind me of someone who does the same.
nature. snap. amazing job P.
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Re: Re. April in Rockhollow
2nd Apr 2019 8:07am
Thank you, Cold Fusion, your comment really impacted. I am grateful. Love and light.
Re. April in Rockhollow
1st Apr 2019 2:01pm
i love a good spring poem! and while i find no pleasure in the gardening myself, i very much appreciate those that do it.
this is quite lovely and a perfect way to kick off NaPo
this is quite lovely and a perfect way to kick off NaPo
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Re: Re. April in Rockhollow
2nd Apr 2019 8:09am
Re. April in Rockhollow
1st Apr 2019 2:37pm
Oh girl! You KNOW your Rock Hollow Poems are my favorite! I do hope this will be a series!
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Re: Re. April in Rockhollow
2nd Apr 2019 8:08am
Thank you, A. And for all your hard work in this challenge, as a guiding light.
With love.
With love.
Re. April in Rockhollow
1st Apr 2019 10:14pm
Astute observation transformed into a picturesque poem. Great write. Good luck 29 times more in NaPo.
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2nd Apr 2019 8:17am
Re. April in Rockhollow
Anonymous
4th Apr 2019 00:38am
Thank you for the warm welcome into your garden. Time certainly flies when we are in our element.
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Re. April in Rockhollow
8th Apr 2019 4:07pm
I love this ode to Spring and you noted nigella, one of my favorite wild flowers...
Thanks for the beautiful picture your words take.
geoff
Thanks for the beautiful picture your words take.
geoff
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