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I Am Peace
the music plays a soliloquy
strokes glance gently off the shoulders
the burdens
the attention
caught up within the epiphany
strings run effortlessly
softly across from bow
to bow
we know instantly
a deep interlude
erupts as a chorus of chords
rise
recesses removed
bathing us
souls soothed
in a scent for you
the hint teases mid air
I float off into another realm
I am peace
the notes play on
songs of my heart
beat slowly along
I am peace
strokes glance gently off the shoulders
the burdens
the attention
caught up within the epiphany
strings run effortlessly
softly across from bow
to bow
we know instantly
a deep interlude
erupts as a chorus of chords
rise
recesses removed
bathing us
souls soothed
in a scent for you
the hint teases mid air
I float off into another realm
I am peace
the notes play on
songs of my heart
beat slowly along
I am peace
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Re. I Am Peace
24th Mar 2019 4:51am
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24th Mar 2019 11:05am
Re. I Am Peace
24th Mar 2019 11:41am
This is very nearly erotic. I enjoy music too much for my own good... Nicely played!
JJ
JJ
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24th Mar 2019 11:49am
Re. I Am Peace
Anonymous
24th Mar 2019 11:52am
you are
and this is
ohm
this is the beauty ov music
it transports us
whether we planned for the journey or not ...
... i may need to switch my behemoth for some beethoven
hugs
katja
and this is
ohm
this is the beauty ov music
it transports us
whether we planned for the journey or not ...
... i may need to switch my behemoth for some beethoven
hugs
katja
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24th Mar 2019 12:05pm
Re. I Am Peace
24th Mar 2019 3:45pm
Re. I Am Peace
24th Mar 2019 5:43pm
I have recently gotten more so into meditation, what a beautiful mantra: I am peace.
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Re. I Am Peace
24th Mar 2019 10:36pm
Admire the serenity here, JusTim, and your usual skill. Me, I am chaos. Too many problems plaguing my soul. Thank you for the gentle lines. I needed them today.
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Re: Re. I Am Peace
24th Mar 2019 11:23pm
Thank you my friend, glad it could help...I need a little peace as I have one more hour of work...but good news is off next two days