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Tangled In Your Sheets
hung out open in a gentle breeze
tangled up in linen sheets
sun she warms with touches grace
kissed upon a dayspring face
the birds they call from just afar
not knowing truly of who they are
the skies, sit calm, the brooke runs near
thoughts set free, as minds come clear
daisies dance in naked fields
scents indrawn her beauty wields
hills do roll and valleys green
pure peace grows in what I've seen
lusters loom on given day
for here I live and here I stay
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Re. Tangled In Your Sheets
23rd Mar 2019 10:13am
Re. Tangled In Your Sheets
23rd Mar 2019 10:42am
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 1:47pm
I'm so ready for spring. Poems like this really bring that home
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23rd Mar 2019 3:33pm
Anonymous
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23rd Mar 2019 2:19pm
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Re: Re. Tangled In Your Sheets
23rd Mar 2019 3:34pm
Re. Tangled In Your Sheets
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 6:57pm
Love the contrast
between the two;
the imagery you
depict is breathtaking ...
~Dev
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Re: Re. Tangled In Your Sheets
23rd Mar 2019 9:07pm
Thank you kindly Devlin, I'm a sucker for nature and with the warming of spring might have to take kids for a hike this week
Re. Tangled In Your Sheets
23rd Mar 2019 8:16pm
A wonderful, serene write, JusTim. Brought joy to my fairly dismal day. Thank you!
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Re: Re. Tangled In Your Sheets
23rd Mar 2019 9:09pm
Thanks Crowfly, mine was dismal cuz inside at work but now it's cleared up as the sun is shining
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Anonymous
23rd Mar 2019 8:55pm
Aaah lovely spring. Loved this.
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23rd Mar 2019 9:10pm