Free Form, or Fall

Well done, your words fall with rythmic fluidity

I just hope there isn't too much rhythm to this.  If it remains, may it be in service to the form.  I have trouble letting go, just let the words venture where they may.  Thank you JusTim!

This is great Crow and everyone knows I love a rhyme! <3

I do too.  I still need practice with the free form style though.  Some find rhyming to be "tacky," but not me or you.  Thank you mysteriouslady!

Its not tacky at all...they just wish they could lay it down like we do!  LOL! <3

Very nice! I think it's awesome, but if you're worried about the rhythm, you could combine some lines & you'll end up with more variety of phrase length. For example "The terms plummet From an inelastic mind" can be all one line & that might break the rhythm of having too many similar line lengths. (Hope that makes sense.....)

That said, I think it's great & no changes are necessary, just trying to address your concern. :)

I thought shorter lines might be conducive to the free form.  I read those who make the most of single words in the body of their work.  Sometimes I feel locked in my style, reading these.  So hard letting go!
Thank you brokentitanium!  

it's bloody great.... but it's not you... does that make sense?
when i click the crow, i'm expecting wit & rhyme & a wicked twist
{again, it's great}
but fuck other's preferences... do you, hun

You're right that it isn't me.  I try for humor and rhyme, but sometimes fall on my face.  It's a tough call how my style will go over on individual poems.  Still, I try.  Thank you shadoe!

Awesome job..better than me. Dear God, so many syllables I'll never get a sonnet going. Lol. I'm envious of you poets with the rhythm. I saw your comment above..I love rhymes now, myself,  but always do you. It's your signature, Crow. Good luck on branching out although I don't believe you'll need it. You're a natural!;)

I will try to continue to loosen up, but find it a strain not to dispense with my usual ploys.  Sometimes they work, sometimes the results are less than effective.  The humor and whatever else I use to trick up my work fall flat.  My newest work may be a case in point.  I will try to retain my style, for what it's worth. Thank you Pandora!    

They don't fall flat silly. I know the struggle as rhyming was challenging for me at first. I'm studying other forms but my practice won't go here.😂

Just glad I didn't fall.  Thank you Renaissance!

This is very good, Sir Crow!

Glad you enjoyed this, Catman.  Thank you!

I love you Thomas and your style...

love Brenda 💕

Thank you Brenda.  I believe my style is here to stay, for better or worse.

I still need to loosen up a bit more, I feel.  Thank you Sky_dancer!