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From This Small Place
I dedicated myself,
Before my fourteenth year,
At the altar Poetry
When days were bright and clear.
It was a second dawning.
When I was born, the first.
Exploring, with a journal;
My insatiable thirst.
A year has turned to many,
I am the poetry.
My mind, the world within it,
This prisoner set free.
You’re lucky, my dear poet,
To dream, then awaken.
For I never sleep until
Every thought’s forsaken.
Published 4th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Entered in the Deep competition “Poetic Medic #4: Now Turn Your Head And Cough”, co-hosted by JohnnyBlaze & Ahavati.
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4th Mar 2019 8:23pm
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4th Mar 2019 8:30pm
I love you too, my dear Sky, and filled with glee when you come near to dance around me, no wonder I get dizzy...
And I thank you most thankfully... there’s no better way to say it. x
And I thank you most thankfully... there’s no better way to say it. x
4th Mar 2019 9:08pm
4th Mar 2019 9:23pm
4th Mar 2019 10:40pm
Superb piece!
"You’re lucky, my dear poet,
To dream, then awaken.
For I never sleep until
Every thought’s forsaken."
Wow absolutely amazing
really enjoyed this fantastically penned piece so good!👏
"You’re lucky, my dear poet,
To dream, then awaken.
For I never sleep until
Every thought’s forsaken."
Wow absolutely amazing
really enjoyed this fantastically penned piece so good!👏
5th Mar 2019 4:46am
Why thank you so much, dear Hunter, for your oh so very generous express of thoughts supporting my ink, and the honor of place on your Reading List.
5th Mar 2019 3:53pm
5th Mar 2019 10:56pm
Thank you so much, John. Your years of tireless support means a lot in how I’m humbled by it.
5th Mar 2019 3:59pm
5th Mar 2019 10:58pm
My gracious thanks, I’m always pleased by your appreciation of my efforts.
5th Mar 2019 10:39pm
Love how you render the writing of poetry into a sacred endeavor. I know how hard you work. This one reveals the commitment to your chosen art. Excellent....
5th Mar 2019 11:01pm
Thank you my dear friend. Oh! how this subject flowed from me, knowing it intimately & so well.
