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Empty Pleasures
such empty pleasures
are merely a distraction
from the awful truth
are merely a distraction
from the awful truth
Author's Note
Written the night before last in a very cynical state of mind. I post a lot of haiku/senryu... heh.
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I tried my best to trace this photo back to its original source, but I was unable to figure it out. Since it's not my photo, I figured I better clarify that for copyright purposes; I don't want to take credit for something that's not mine.
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I tried my best to trace this photo back to its original source, but I was unable to figure it out. Since it's not my photo, I figured I better clarify that for copyright purposes; I don't want to take credit for something that's not mine.
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Re. Empty Pleasures
Anonymous
27th Feb 2019 8:22pm
I actually really liked this little snippet. It’s the emphasis of the word “empty” that really packs the punch. Pleasures could be anything. “Empty” adds weight to the nothingness.
Smooth read. Dark message. Thank you for sharing.
-M
Smooth read. Dark message. Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. Empty Pleasures
27th Feb 2019 9:39pm
...and thank you for reading and providing a nice commentary.
There's definitely an internal struggle going on inside of me. I try to maintain positivity and keep my faith in humanity, but sometimes my cynicism is really overwhelming. I try :P
There's definitely an internal struggle going on inside of me. I try to maintain positivity and keep my faith in humanity, but sometimes my cynicism is really overwhelming. I try :P
Re. Empty Pleasures
27th Feb 2019 8:28pm
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27th Feb 2019 9:41pm
Thanks for your comment and RL, Fenyx! I'm glad that I am not alone here in this observation. Some of us are so distracted by these empty pleasures, we will never truly live...
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27th Feb 2019 9:44pm
Re. Empty Pleasures
27th Feb 2019 9:46pm
First, the picture is priceless. Secondly, your words are truth. Our world thrives on voids as well as smoke and mirrors. It's terrible what has become of society and and most haven't a clue. Sigh.
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28th Feb 2019 9:12am
Thanks for stopping by, Pandora!
I completely agree... It's pretty disheartening. This world is a crazy place :\
For the photo: at first I envisioned a picture of a person sitting in a dark room with the indiscernible glow of a TV in front of them. I did find pictures that looked very similar to what I was looking for, but once I found this picture, I was satisfied.
I completely agree... It's pretty disheartening. This world is a crazy place :\
For the photo: at first I envisioned a picture of a person sitting in a dark room with the indiscernible glow of a TV in front of them. I did find pictures that looked very similar to what I was looking for, but once I found this picture, I was satisfied.
Re. Empty Pleasures
27th Feb 2019 10:29pm
So so true NewBeginnings! Love this lil spill this resonates very much i feel like way too many of us are distracted as you said.
Also a comment you made deeply resonates
"There's definitely an internal struggle going on inside of me. I try to maintain positivity and keep my faith in humanity, but sometimes my cynicism is really overwhelming. I try :P"
Ahhhhh I feel ya m8 i feel ya i know what you mean my cynicism definitely gets the best of me alot of the time
Very overwhelming indeed
Also a comment you made deeply resonates
"There's definitely an internal struggle going on inside of me. I try to maintain positivity and keep my faith in humanity, but sometimes my cynicism is really overwhelming. I try :P"
Ahhhhh I feel ya m8 i feel ya i know what you mean my cynicism definitely gets the best of me alot of the time
Very overwhelming indeed
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2nd Mar 2019 00:15am
Hey Hunter! Thanks for stopping by to read this. I thought you might like this one, actually :)
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Re: Re. Empty Pleasures
2nd Mar 2019 00:22am
You're dang right it's scary! Thanks for taking the time to comment and relate...!
Empty Pleasures
28th Feb 2019 4:44pm
Wonderfully punchy, NewB!
But who measures such pleasures: can unsuspecting children, who are often the very victims?
Of course, adult human beings pursue decadent pursuits that arrest their minds just as much.
That image is amazingly apt, on as well as off, the page.
But who measures such pleasures: can unsuspecting children, who are often the very victims?
Of course, adult human beings pursue decadent pursuits that arrest their minds just as much.
That image is amazingly apt, on as well as off, the page.
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Re: Empty Pleasures
2nd Mar 2019 4:59pm
Thanks, cab, you're definitely right!
Yeah, it's up to the parents to steer their children in the right direction. It was mainly the adults that I was speaking about in this, myself included; but it starts are a young age. I appreciate your kind comments as usual, and thanks for stopping by again!
Yeah, it's up to the parents to steer their children in the right direction. It was mainly the adults that I was speaking about in this, myself included; but it starts are a young age. I appreciate your kind comments as usual, and thanks for stopping by again!
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Re. Empty Pleasures
4th Mar 2019 8:28pm
So much truth here ... that's why I minimize my time in front of the tube ... prefer reading and writing instead ...
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9th Mar 2019 1:41am