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She Lives in my Building
She's the most beautiful girl next door woman I've ever met
That's why I don't trust her
I know she was mean to a dog of one of her roommates
Its ruins her wholesome smile
Her sweet hallway hello
Rings hollow in the vapid air
She never did anything wrong my way
I wish I didn't know about the dog
I would have liked to like her
Sweetness like that is hardly ever real
Real grit is a slightly crooked grin
You know it when you see it
Truth
That's why I don't trust her
I know she was mean to a dog of one of her roommates
Its ruins her wholesome smile
Her sweet hallway hello
Rings hollow in the vapid air
She never did anything wrong my way
I wish I didn't know about the dog
I would have liked to like her
Sweetness like that is hardly ever real
Real grit is a slightly crooked grin
You know it when you see it
Truth
Author's Note
People man
Jeez
Jeez
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Re. She Lives in my Building
23rd Feb 2019 9:12pm
Yep. People forget... People can see... I say why fake it. I'd rather take a true dirty stare than a fake sweet smile.
Poet. Rocks.
Poet. Rocks.
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Re. She Lives in my Building
23rd Feb 2019 9:31pm
Re. She Lives in my Building
23rd Feb 2019 10:00pm
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23rd Feb 2019 10:26pm
Re. She Lives in my Building
23rd Feb 2019 11:36pm
Ugh, I deal with those people on the same level they offer me - all surface. I won't surrender an ounce of my real self to them.
Too much sugar isn't healthy.
Nice write!
Too much sugar isn't healthy.
Nice write!
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24th Feb 2019 1:45am
Re. She Lives in my Building
24th Feb 2019 6:15pm
So true... people are strange....
Thanks for sharing big popa👍🏻
Loves you
Jackie xo
Thanks for sharing big popa👍🏻
Loves you
Jackie xo
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Re: Re. She Lives in my Building
24th Feb 2019 6:31pm
Shit you don't want to know
Crawls up from under the floorboards
Glad to see you back in the swamp
This place needs your voice
Bronx baby
Xo
Crawls up from under the floorboards
Glad to see you back in the swamp
This place needs your voice
Bronx baby
Xo
Re. She Lives in my Building
26th Feb 2019 10:06pm
People ...they can really be some suprising subjects,
....can they not? Ha!
....can they not? Ha!
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Re. She Lives in my Building
8th May 2021 11:17am
THIS IS WHAT I KEEP TELLING OUR YOUTH GROUP THAT ONE MSITAKE ONE SECOND ONE WRONG ACT CAN CHANGE A PERSONS PERSPECTIVE OF U SO MUCH
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Re: Re. She Lives in my Building
8th May 2021 11:26am
FORTUNATELY THAT PRETTY MEAN WOMAN MOVED AWAY
REMAINED FRIENDS WITH THE DOG OWNER AND DOG
MAN, PEOPLE SUCK SOMETIMES
DOGS RULE
REMAINED FRIENDS WITH THE DOG OWNER AND DOG
MAN, PEOPLE SUCK SOMETIMES
DOGS RULE
Re: Re. She Lives in my Building
8th May 2021 11:31am
Re: Re. She Lives in my Building
8th May 2021 11:36am
OMG
SO SORRY
MY 16 YEAR OLD DOG PASSED AWSY 4 YEARS AGO, HAVENT BEEN THE SAME SINCE
TRYING TO GET ANOTHER BUT HAS TO BE A MUTT WITH THE RIGHT KIND OF FLOPPY EARS
SO SORRY
MY 16 YEAR OLD DOG PASSED AWSY 4 YEARS AGO, HAVENT BEEN THE SAME SINCE
TRYING TO GET ANOTHER BUT HAS TO BE A MUTT WITH THE RIGHT KIND OF FLOPPY EARS