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BDSM
feeling the rhythm of the place
inside your dungeon's hall
an exotic feel of leather on skin
hisses through the air
as strap seeks target
releases the sinful greed
bound by flesh
never to be free
so seductive is your flow
orgasmic rush
as you enter with force
breaking in my back door
taking what's yours
I'm not haughty
I am straight up rebellious
naughty Vixen playing
on your exalted grounds
Sadism serves you
I've developed a taste for blood
will you be able to keep up with me?
you secure my hands behind me
then gag and collar me
bringing me down on all fours
you finger my tightness
tasting my wetness
you know I'm wanton
you methodically break me down
in Psalms and Proverbs
giving it to me old testament style
a modern day Prophet
with a cult following
got me screaming hallelujahs
to a dead god
who won't hear my pleas for mercy
taken to the point of pain
so deep in no one will hear me
you baptize me in gasoline
then set me ablaze
while you fuck me doggie style
and get off
I'm forever branded internally
by the fire of your cock
the master over torture
has had his way
then with a look of disdain
says "bitch now what?"
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Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 00:54am
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21st Feb 2019 00:57am
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21st Feb 2019 1:16am
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21st Feb 2019 1:19am
thank you graciously dearest poet I'm happy you felt the erotism here...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 1:31am
Damn! I could feel the straps biting flesh.
This was fantastic on a level few truly experience.
This was fantastic on a level few truly experience.
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Re: Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 1:32am
thank you graciously beautiful Bonzi I'm happy you felt the pleasure here at the end of a strap...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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21st Feb 2019 1:37am
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Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 4:18am
You led me right into the dungeon with this. Though I still sense you have the upper hand. You set this one ablaze!
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21st Feb 2019 4:20am
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2019 11:17am
Powerful brilliant erotica, beautiful Brenda! ❣🌞❣
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21st Feb 2019 1:12pm
thank you graciously beautiful Soulz so happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 5:18pm
Distilled to self-confrontation by cathartic intervention.....every good mirror shows the truth of ourselves.
Psychosurgical words....
Psychosurgical words....
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Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 7:09pm
You hit the words just right in this one, love. Only you could pull this smoking hot write off. Damn.
You had me giggling with this...
"you methodically break me down
in Psalms and Proverbs
giving it to me old testament style
a modern day Prophet
with a cult following
got me screaming hallelujahs
to a dead god
who won't hear my pleas for mercy" 🔥
You had me giggling with this...
"you methodically break me down
in Psalms and Proverbs
giving it to me old testament style
a modern day Prophet
with a cult following
got me screaming hallelujahs
to a dead god
who won't hear my pleas for mercy" 🔥
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Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 7:57pm
very hardcore - sadism is too often an ego trip - I always find it hard to separate self from surrender - and that may be needed to cope with hardcore.
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24th Feb 2019 7:14pm
thank you beautiful Sweet One for the read and your thoughts... it's deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. BDSM
21st Feb 2019 10:09pm
I particularly love that last line. It's as if you're never satisfied with his efforts. But that's just the conclusion. This is fine work, from beginning to end.
Love, Thomas
Love, Thomas
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24th Feb 2019 7:14pm
thank you graciously dearest Thomas for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. BDSM
8th Jul 2019 3:27pm
crimsin I ask you "What now bitch" do I decide or do I order you to beg me for what you want next?
there are no words to describe your excellence in script how from beginning to end have me spellbound, my mind awash with every thrust the smell of your sex, leather on skin you on all fours...……………….
there are no words to describe your excellence in script how from beginning to end have me spellbound, my mind awash with every thrust the smell of your sex, leather on skin you on all fours...……………….
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