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A Valentine

Far beyond the thunder clouds
We'll lie on sunny wooded slopes
And laugh and love as in our youth
Without the pain and broken hopes.

Written by Ammonite

Published 14th Feb 2019

Author's Note

I wrote these four lines for the Valentine's Day card that I gave to my wife in February last year. She has been recovering very very slowly from a painful and somewhat crippling illness that has badly disrupted her academic career for many years.

#hope #love #rhyming

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Re. A Valentine

crimsin (Unveiling)

14th Feb 2019 4:09pm

dearest Ammonite so beautiful is your love
for your lovely wife...

I hope she is recovering...

Happy Valentine's Day to you both...

love Brenda 💕

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Re. A Valentine

Ammonite

15th Feb 2019 3:24pm

Thank you, Brenda, for your sympathy. My darling wife's recovery is dreadfully slow. She was bedridden in severe pain 28 years ago and very slowly improving since then. She will never be totally free of pain. I give her a Valentine's Day card every year, and usually try to find one that will make her laugh!