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Carousel Rides
His transgressions were in discord, with an onslaught like a satyr, his thrusts so indelicate and uncivilized. To its abyss, he assaulted her throat as he watched her chest... breaths encumbered, heaving nipples like jewels. Her legs writhed while also clutching into the mattress, heels digging... struggling to make tread. Like the claws of a prowess and the prey, into his thighs, her nails burrowed and etched. She wore cheeks of scarlet flush while lost in the pandemonium of his collisions, her breaths also stifled by each
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Only at selfish discretion, he yielded her breaths, while whimsical and starry eyed, she gazed. From cherry stained lips in swell, saliva trickled down her face and over her gorgeous, deep set eyes. Coyly, he smiled, just knowing he could fuck her pretty little mouth until it was raw.
This too, was her aphrodisia and he knew, with a vengeance, soon would his face be her own carousel of debauchery. What the hell though, was his last thought as he spiraled out of control. Crashing forth, he finished her face with one hell of a climax . Finding themselves in reciprocal grins, he spoke......
.............."Thank you, baby doll" as he gently carressed her frothy, lust ridden face. Her face expressed what he already knew to expect. While rather excited, he was a bit trepidatious of facing the consequences of his brute actions.
Published 14th Feb 2019
| Edited 24th Jul 2019
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14th Feb 2019 3:39am
will you serenely put this in the highs amount of pleasure for the both of them
the bite should have been just a bit harder
that would please her a lot more
awesome
the bite should have been just a bit harder
that would please her a lot more
awesome
14th Feb 2019 6:33am
14th Feb 2019 3:42am
beautiful Pandora exhilaratingly hot
I feel completely spent after reading...
pleasantly so...
love Brenda ❤
I feel completely spent after reading...
pleasantly so...
love Brenda ❤
14th Feb 2019 6:34am
14th Feb 2019 6:42am
I'm going to release my naughty side fully I think for just for you I feel her emerging from the shadows 😈
14th Feb 2019 6:49am
14th Feb 2019 6:50am
14th Feb 2019 4:08am
I see you really turned the sizzle factor up on this oral escapade. I will be tossing and turning after that luscious serving. That one hits in all the right places.
14th Feb 2019 6:36am
Yay, so glad you liked it T. I've grown so fond of sensuality, this one feels strange & I'm no angel.😇
14th Feb 2019 6:30am
An aggressive taking. Favourite phrase "nipples like jewels" (I realise "boobies", the breasts, rhymes with "rubies" so it is more apt a metaphor than you may have thought).
14th Feb 2019 6:38am
Very aggressive, I stepped out of sensuality & now I'm back in. Lol. I think. Boobies & rubies.. love the rhyme.;)
14th Feb 2019 6:31am
14th Feb 2019 6:38am
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14th Feb 2019 12:58pm
Holy shit This is so intimately intense
Very much enjoyed this👏👏 each line pulled me in deeper and deeperr
this is so wonderfully written as well!
A sensually seductive wordsmith you are no doubt
Love this!
Very much enjoyed this👏👏 each line pulled me in deeper and deeperr
this is so wonderfully written as well!
A sensually seductive wordsmith you are no doubt
Love this!
15th Feb 2019 2:48pm
Yay!! I'm humbled by your words & glad this one went good. I haven't written in this realm in quite some time.* grin*
14th Feb 2019 11:08pm
Bravisima, Pandora! You are the queen of titilation 💋 This piece is so electric, so filled with tingle makers.
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15th Feb 2019 10:13pm
☻ Glad you liked it it buddy. I had some trepidation about it.. I've gotten too sensual. Lol
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16th Mar 2019 5:59am
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16th Mar 2019 6:16am
Giggles...I don't get naughty like this often these days....The sensual switch flipped off
