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Simplistic as Nature
Looking out trying to sort what's within
spying the squirrel and the hedgehog
attempting to live together in harmony
nature in it's simplicity, take it all in
a butterfly flutters at daybreak
uncovering all life's little mystery
give and take, sparks still ignite
lying naked in your understanding
gentleness eloping under an electric sky
heartbeats surrendering to midnight
fingers touch, loving eyes bravely shut
equanimity undisturbed never felt so fine
spying the squirrel and the hedgehog
attempting to live together in harmony
nature in it's simplicity, take it all in
a butterfly flutters at daybreak
uncovering all life's little mystery
give and take, sparks still ignite
lying naked in your understanding
gentleness eloping under an electric sky
heartbeats surrendering to midnight
fingers touch, loving eyes bravely shut
equanimity undisturbed never felt so fine
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Re. Simplistic as Nature
13th Feb 2019 5:36pm
Now, that's my kind of poem! This is great, JusTim. You really captured the magic of nature here, and what also appears to be sensual moment :)
Lovely, I really enjoyed your poetry here.
Lovely, I really enjoyed your poetry here.
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Re. Simplistic as Nature
14th Feb 2019 2:10am
why haven't I wrote this one?
it's funny how simple nature is and we make it complex with the view of our naked eye
it's funny how simple nature is and we make it complex with the view of our naked eye
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Re: Re. Simplistic as Nature
14th Feb 2019 2:19am
That is true, we need to make life simple and enjoy each little thing about it
Re. Simplistic as Nature
14th Feb 2019 9:08pm
This is some truly amazing in ink Tim...you've brought nature to the page via some simple but profound words.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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