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Paragon's Lullaby
Upon her thighs of geniality, his lips and tongue impetuously traveled their every convex. Reaching her apex, his fingers sundered, eyes affixed to her unfolding vale; glistening and opalescent. Sentient; his tongue ardently bowed ~ affable and versent in each carress of her comfort. For a tender bud of crimson, he voyaged; mouth wielding to her utmost raw of flesh. Tenderly, his teeth grazed as she serenaded to him, the consonant pulsing of her sex. In writhing and waking tides; impelled of his sweet paragon ~ celestial were her cries. Her sweet rippling rose greeted his tongue, as he quelled of her to sing to him, in lullabies.
Published 11th Feb 2019
| Edited 9th Apr 2019
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11th Feb 2019 1:54am
sensual song she sang in his ear as he continue his loving trace
upon her heavenly gate
awesome work
upon her heavenly gate
awesome work
11th Feb 2019 2:16am
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11th Feb 2019 2:36am
Heehee. I'm mere crumbles to you, but I'm so glad to see you show up with some praise! Also humbled by your add. Keep writing so your language rubs off on me..I Love it so!!!
11th Feb 2019 2:40am
11th Feb 2019 2:58am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
11th Feb 2019 3:28am
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11th Feb 2019 4:04am
Aww, this is such a touching comment. I'm glad it came across you that way. Thank you dearly!!
🙏;)
🙏;)
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
11th Feb 2019 4:39am
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11th Feb 2019 4:31am
An exploration that could go on for hours. A serene quality to this sensual write. A voyage not a quickie.
12th Feb 2019 11:26pm
Yes, those are the best ones. It's time to snap out of this old world sensuality and into a primal write now. Perhaps explicit & I haven't
went there in awhile now. 😇
went there in awhile now. 😇
13th Feb 2019 1:58am
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11th Feb 2019 6:21am
Echo theEgoEffect but would add it paints a picture of him cunnilingually enjoying her offering of herself. Sweet seductive.
12th Feb 2019 11:29pm
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11th Feb 2019 2:33pm
Beautiful exploration. Your writing is delicate and tender, yet powerful. Enjoyed! :)
12th Feb 2019 11:30pm
11th Feb 2019 5:37pm
Brava. Pandora! "He imbibed from her cistern" makes me thirst...super-sensual passage.
12th Feb 2019 11:32pm
11th Feb 2019 9:58pm
Such eloquence to this Pandora. This is much more sophisticated than the usual erotic writes. Superb work!
12th Feb 2019 11:33pm
I thank you for the add & the lovely comment, crowfly!! Every now & then my mind sneaks into some old world type sensuality.;)
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Feb 2019 6:36am
16th Feb 2019 6:34am
part poem..part tutorial....all ultra-sensual..
oh my....got me clutching my masculine pearls...you took me there Pandora
oh my..did i say that already?...this is pure poetic succulence..
oh my....got me clutching my masculine pearls...you took me there Pandora
oh my..did i say that already?...this is pure poetic succulence..
16th Feb 2019 7:07am
Heehee. Man pearls, hey.. that's a new euphanisum to use!!;) Glad you liked it buddy & the add to boot;) Thank you!!
