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Reflections of You
reflections of you
mirrored softly in my mind
by the water's edge
mirrored softly in my mind
by the water's edge
Author's Note
A haiku for a special someone...
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Re. Reflections of You
Anonymous
4th Feb 2019 7:48am
love it!!!!
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4th Feb 2019 5:39pm
Awww, thanks Naajir. Reading some of your haiku, I guessed that you might like this one :)
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4th Feb 2019 8:12am
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4th Feb 2019 5:47pm
Thank you, eswaller! She really means a lot to me... and she truly is a special someone :)
There's a lot of feelings hidden behind just a few short words in this one...
I appreciate you taking the time to let me know you liked it!
There's a lot of feelings hidden behind just a few short words in this one...
I appreciate you taking the time to let me know you liked it!
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Jul 2019 12:45pm
4th Feb 2019 11:52am
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Re: Re. Reflections of You
4th Feb 2019 5:51pm
...that means more than you can probably imagine. Thanks so much, Whispers! You're sweet :)
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4th Feb 2019 12:42pm
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4th Feb 2019 5:53pm
Hey Hunter, thanks for taking the time to show some love :)
Happy to hear you enjoyed it!
Happy to hear you enjoyed it!
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4th Feb 2019 12:43pm
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4th Feb 2019 6:11pm
Thanks, Virgil. Your feedback is much appreciated!
I spent about 10 minutes going back and forth with that part. It was either going to be mirror or mirrored, and I was having trouble deciding which. It made sense with both words: 'mirror softly in my mind' sounded more elegant, but "mirrored softly in my mind" sounded better with the overall sentence.
Either way, I'm happy with it, so thank you for the reassurance and the compliment :)
I spent about 10 minutes going back and forth with that part. It was either going to be mirror or mirrored, and I was having trouble deciding which. It made sense with both words: 'mirror softly in my mind' sounded more elegant, but "mirrored softly in my mind" sounded better with the overall sentence.
Either way, I'm happy with it, so thank you for the reassurance and the compliment :)
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
4th Feb 2019 12:58pm
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Re: Re. Reflections of You
5th Feb 2019 6:33am
I always appreciate your feedback, Barona. I checked out both of your haikus, and I am pleased as usual. Expressive and beautiful :)
Such an elegantly worded compliment you've paid me as well!
Such an elegantly worded compliment you've paid me as well!
Re. Reflections of You
4th Feb 2019 5:48pm
Re: Re. Reflections of You
5th Feb 2019 6:36am
Thanks so much for stopping by again, summer. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it...
A beautiful haiku, inspired by a beautiful person :)
A beautiful haiku, inspired by a beautiful person :)
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5th Feb 2019 6:59am
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5th Feb 2019 7:31am
Re. Reflections of You
4th Feb 2019 9:32pm
As said just before this in EgoEffects commentary..it requires a well thought action and good poet to create a haiku of my praise. Good stuff!
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5th Feb 2019 6:37am
Wow, thanks for that wonderful reply! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Pandora!
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5th Feb 2019 3:23pm
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5th Feb 2019 3:35pm
Re. Reflections of You
5th Feb 2019 1:21am
this poem is beautifully dainty, my favorite kind of poem.
- Fairy
- Fairy
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5th Feb 2019 6:39am
Re. Reflections of You
Anonymous
5th Feb 2019 7:57am
Hey NewB,
Nice haiku my friend. A lot of beauty is so few words.
Loved it.
Matthew.
Nice haiku my friend. A lot of beauty is so few words.
Loved it.
Matthew.
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Re: Re. Reflections of You
6th Feb 2019 00:26am
Heya Matthew :)
I see you found some time to kill on the website, heh. Thanks for dropping by to say hello, and for leaving some nice feedback!
I see you found some time to kill on the website, heh. Thanks for dropping by to say hello, and for leaving some nice feedback!
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5th Feb 2019 8:30pm
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6th Feb 2019 7:55pm
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment, JusTim. I'm happy that you liked it! :)
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Anonymous
6th Feb 2019 7:38pm
Oh, I love this. Delicately beautiful. She must be really special.
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6th Feb 2019 7:56pm
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Apr 2020 8:45pm
6th Feb 2019 8:15pm
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Re: Re. Reflections of You
6th Feb 2019 8:20pm
Thanks so much for stopping by and checking out my poetry as well, Ultra :)
Re. Reflections of You
7th Feb 2019 1:10am
Beautiful haiku...profound depth with imagery touches the heart...You hit it right my friend...Perfect!!!
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
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Re: Re. Reflections of You
8th Feb 2019 4:29am
Awesome! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the RL and that uplifting comment, Wolfman!
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Re. Reflections of You
10th Feb 2019 7:10am
glows in its unwavering picture. painted. mirroring water is just another element of the purest love felt..
beatiful. crystalline shine. in all its brevity!
write on..& thanks for the read:)
beatiful. crystalline shine. in all its brevity!
write on..& thanks for the read:)
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