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What Lays Beneath
Blanketed atop his own, laid the palms of his hearts tender affection. There under and swaddled by both; a most treasured parchment. Obscured were the grounds of his souls jurisdiction; sacred, the terrain. Within her every basin and contour; his furrow of hospitality and worship, he found himself transfixed. It was his resolute asylum; the sanctum to quay of his burdens, she -- his hollow harbor of his respite. Seemingly, for his being was she created, his every avid longing cradled and subdued in her deepest of marrow. This domain was far more than a mere playground of pleasure. Her essence was the divine completeness to his soul. Under their palms, laid the epitome and testimony of his sexual healing. These were the grounds his souls jurisdiction.
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Re. What Lays Beneath
3rd Feb 2019 10:42pm
yin/yang...yoni/lingam...a very tantric verse...with your usual and delightful bouquet of language...love it
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3rd Feb 2019 10:47pm
Thank you for a beautifully uplifting compliment. I appreciate the comment love!!
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4th Feb 2019 4:10am
"Transfixed with its every basin and contour...". Damn, I do feel that obsession. Put me in the asylum. I am ready to worship.
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4th Feb 2019 5:38am
You were already ready to worship on the Lord's day with your write. *giggles * Thank you for the inspiration, I was saving that pic for something sensual. I bow to your gracious RL add, T.
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4th Feb 2019 11:24am
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Echo bcpoet and skydancer. Love the phrases, which would probably make many male readers wish themselves in that place (including single me):
his sacred terrain... his furrow of hospitality and worship...his most tender and resolute asylum; the sanctum to quay all burdens,..; seemingly for his fervent being was she created - as it cradled and subdued his every avid longing. This domain was far more than a mere playground of pleasure. Her core was the divine completeness to his spirit.
Picture lends itself to rhyming caption I thought up, influenced by the passage:
Their hand pairs converged at the place
Where he would find manhood's solace.
That was the way they liked to pet,
To make her nether regions wet.
his sacred terrain... his furrow of hospitality and worship...his most tender and resolute asylum; the sanctum to quay all burdens,..; seemingly for his fervent being was she created - as it cradled and subdued his every avid longing. This domain was far more than a mere playground of pleasure. Her core was the divine completeness to his spirit.
Picture lends itself to rhyming caption I thought up, influenced by the passage:
Their hand pairs converged at the place
Where he would find manhood's solace.
That was the way they liked to pet,
To make her nether regions wet.
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4th Feb 2019 8:07pm
I love those rhymes Solomon!! I truly saved that pic for something sensual. I'm so very glad it played out so well. Thank you
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4th Feb 2019 8:14pm
I saw that very same reflection in that picture thus saving it for a write about sweet love vs a fuck. I'm so glad that it was so well received. I'm pleased you enjoyed it & those things that are ever changing with me. Thank you!!
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4th Feb 2019 3:06pm
Echoing everyone such a fantastic spill! Really enjoyed this splendid sensuality👏👏
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Anonymous
4th Feb 2019 4:04pm
This is freaking stellar.
One of the best I think I have Ever read from you
One of the best I think I have Ever read from you
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4th Feb 2019 8:19pm
Mr Ranger gets a huge hug as he just made my freaking day!! I'm blessed you enjoyed it so.
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4th Feb 2019 9:45pm
naughty girl how can i say this right up my alley
hands hold your valley soft and seductive touch
moans in my ear
awesome
hands hold your valley soft and seductive touch
moans in my ear
awesome
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5th Feb 2019 1:51am
Oh, I know it does. I must keep em cumming;) Thank you for that awesome!!
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10th Mar 2019 1:54am
souls jurisdiction...yes..
''A hollow harbor of respite; seemingly for his fervent being was she created''
another yes.
RL...yes...
lovin the pic as well...
''A hollow harbor of respite; seemingly for his fervent being was she created''
another yes.
RL...yes...
lovin the pic as well...
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10th Mar 2019 2:03am
Thank you so much. I'm glad it hit a spot, being shambles to yours. I appreciate your kindness beyond words!!
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10th Mar 2019 2:33am
You're welcome....and thank you for the praise.
I'm truly honored
i really enjoy the way you structure your words
and you word choice. It lends to the rich texture of your vibes. Very unique and exquisitely fluid.
I'm truly honored
i really enjoy the way you structure your words
and you word choice. It lends to the rich texture of your vibes. Very unique and exquisitely fluid.
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