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Opaque Ecstasy
In flowing tendrils of brown; bareknuckled, his clasp
With every raw assault to her divide -- unfurling and with force; supplicating his hunger
Her liquid lust weeped as she
devoured him; tributes of cream.....
coating
lathering
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___ greedy for each savage descent; voraciously fucked senseless by each slamming
collision
Hands ceaselessly bound to his shoulders; from each deep pummeling merge - nails burrowed and etched into his flesh
With soul screaming cries and the most angelic of orgasmic sighs; her praise of pleasure hailed
Her walls;
Pleading
URGING
Conjuring
____ Craving of his release
His breath labored & heavy with heat; throaty territorial grunts and lewd profanities radiating
Between gasps; it's warmth, she inhaled of amidst her face
Authoritative and superior could he be for only so long; irresistible was her pursuit of his repletion
She topped him from the bottom
Her vault petitioning;
clenching ___ clutching
His swell and upsurge; she craved
Coaxed and purged; his opaque ecstasy surrendering to her plea within
With every raw assault to her divide -- unfurling and with force; supplicating his hunger
Her liquid lust weeped as she
devoured him; tributes of cream.....
coating
lathering
c
a
s
c
a
d
i
n
g
___ greedy for each savage descent; voraciously fucked senseless by each slamming
Hands ceaselessly bound to his shoulders; from each deep pummeling merge - nails burrowed and etched into his flesh
With soul screaming cries and the most angelic of orgasmic sighs; her praise of pleasure hailed
Her walls;
Pleading
URGING
Conjuring
____ Craving of his release
His breath labored & heavy with heat; throaty territorial grunts and lewd profanities radiating
Between gasps; it's warmth, she inhaled of amidst her face
Authoritative and superior could he be for only so long; irresistible was her pursuit of his repletion
She topped him from the bottom
Her vault petitioning;
clenching ___ clutching
His swell and upsurge; she craved
Coaxed and purged; his opaque ecstasy surrendering to her plea within
Published 3rd Feb 2019
| Edited 5th Feb 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
3rd Feb 2019 4:38am
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3rd Feb 2019 6:20pm
Thank you, I try my best and it's fun pLaYing with my words once again. It's a step back for the realm I've grown to prefer, but variety never hurts.
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
3rd Feb 2019 5:33am
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3rd Feb 2019 6:24pm
3rd Feb 2019 7:15am
Favourite lines, which capture the "sexual Hallelujah" Leonard Cohen spoke of.
Hands ceaselessly bound to his shoulders; from each deep pummeling merge - nails burrowed and etched into his flesh
With soul screaming cries and the most angelic of orgasmic sighs; her praise of pleasure hailed
Hands ceaselessly bound to his shoulders; from each deep pummeling merge - nails burrowed and etched into his flesh
With soul screaming cries and the most angelic of orgasmic sighs; her praise of pleasure hailed
3rd Feb 2019 6:27pm
Glad you liked it Solomon. I must look at that reference likened to these lines. I love learning new stuff.
3rd Feb 2019 7:42pm
Cohen said these words in reference to his song Hallelujah, particularly the verse that mentions (without naming them) Samson and Delilah and David and Bathsheba.
3rd Feb 2019 9:38am
3rd Feb 2019 6:29pm
I appreciate it and your add so much. Here lately, I'm wanting to crank it up the intensity and fun formats once again.
3rd Feb 2019 2:59pm
your thoughts are wild and hot pen must be hot with this as i was in reading
sweet erotic work
mistress of love
sweet erotic work
mistress of love
3rd Feb 2019 6:31pm
I bow to your praise if Mistress of Love is my newest title.;) Thank you, hun.
3rd Feb 2019 6:45pm
3rd Feb 2019 3:07pm
A rollicking romp delivered with such style. I really enjoyed the creative formatting. The descriptive nature of this savage descent is incredible.
"His breath labored & heavy with heat; throaty territorial grunts and lewd profanities radiating"
This man is a beast! But she appears, happily pummeled.
"His breath labored & heavy with heat; throaty territorial grunts and lewd profanities radiating"
This man is a beast! But she appears, happily pummeled.
3rd Feb 2019 6:34pm
Thank you. I'm feeling the naughty scape back in to mingle with the sensuality. I haven't formatted like this in so long either, it was fun!
3rd Feb 2019 9:04pm
3rd Feb 2019 10:16pm
3rd Feb 2019 10:20pm
4th Feb 2019 00:13am
Very cleverly written and styled. It's truly erotic and one of a kind. A cascade of brilliance...
4th Feb 2019 2:53am
Anonymous
4th Feb 2019 10:16pm
Unique, erotic and stunning
5th Feb 2019 1:48am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
5th Feb 2019 11:12am
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That's awesome!! You just made my day with this comment. Plus that add!!;) Thank you, Laertes
