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Recurrent
Birds call with spring
in tongues
humans cannot understand
but interpret still.
The heart is not deaf;
winter will end
its frigid dominance.
In absence of warmth
we experience belief—
like seeing only the hour
of sun to rise from rest;
as that egret alighting
from the eastern pond.
I never want to leave home;
your own being—
it is no less than pure
within me . . .
as all seasons are.
~
in tongues
humans cannot understand
but interpret still.
The heart is not deaf;
winter will end
its frigid dominance.
In absence of warmth
we experience belief—
like seeing only the hour
of sun to rise from rest;
as that egret alighting
from the eastern pond.
I never want to leave home;
your own being—
it is no less than pure
within me . . .
as all seasons are.
~
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 3rd Feb 2019
Author's Note
For the Poetic Medic #3: Don't Pull The Plug On Me! ( I almost did - twice ) comp, orchestrated by the none other than the master of entangling verse - JohnnyBlaze.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10619/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/10619/
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Re. Recurrent
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2019 9:37pm
OMG! This is AMAZING!
I don't even recognize the original poem anywhere.
And so poetic! 📝❤
I'm s p e e c h l e s s . . .
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I don't even recognize the original poem anywhere.
And so poetic! 📝❤
I'm s p e e c h l e s s . . .
💜💏💋
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3rd Feb 2019 9:40pm
This was NOT easy ( for me ), let me tell you. It's a bear to wrestle down!
Thank you!
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Thank you!
💜💏💋
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7th Feb 2019 5:18pm
wordless ...from ur minimalistic art ..& the faith & love shines forever. Sun in ur words dear one <3 x
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14th Feb 2019 1:32am
Much like a deconstruction of haiku.this work speaks in seasons and elements.
Well done.
Well done.
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14th Feb 2019 1:34am
Thanks! It was a grueling challenge!
I challenge you to the challenge! Many have tried - only three have succeeded! LOL!
I challenge you to the challenge! Many have tried - only three have succeeded! LOL!
Re. Recurrent
Sage, this is beautiful.
If it could be an entry in the competition instead of an example, it would get the win. And please trust me, I /never/ say something like this lightly, no matter what.
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If it could be an entry in the competition instead of an example, it would get the win. And please trust me, I /never/ say something like this lightly, no matter what.
🐾
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