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Weightless
Acrostic-
Wandering within
Eternal soundscapes
Illuminated under rays of
Glorious melodies and
Halos of emotive
Techniques
Launching me into
Endless streams of
Swirling sounds
Sedating my soul
Wandering within
Eternal soundscapes
Illuminated under rays of
Glorious melodies and
Halos of emotive
Techniques
Launching me into
Endless streams of
Swirling sounds
Sedating my soul
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Re. Weightless
30th Jan 2019 12:54pm
so beautiful dearest Hunter
I felt my cares fall away while reading...
love Brenda 💕
I felt my cares fall away while reading...
love Brenda 💕
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30th Jan 2019 9:06pm
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2019 4:34pm
"Sedating my soul" absolutely exquisite.
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30th Jan 2019 9:21pm
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2019 9:22pm
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30th Jan 2019 4:35pm
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Re. Weightless
31st Jan 2019 1:14am
Heavenly, man! I loved it. Beautiful acrostics :)
A friendly suggestion: if you bolden the first letters, as I have, it might help to make your word stand out even more. Also, see how in Illuminated, the l's and i's are indistinguishable from eachother? The boldening of the letters OR a change to a font with serifs, such as Times New Roman, would remedy this as well.
Obviously all of that is just my opinion, so take it or leave it, heh.
A friendly suggestion: if you bolden the first letters, as I have, it might help to make your word stand out even more. Also, see how in Illuminated, the l's and i's are indistinguishable from eachother? The boldening of the letters OR a change to a font with serifs, such as Times New Roman, would remedy this as well.
Obviously all of that is just my opinion, so take it or leave it, heh.
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Re: Re. Weightless
31st Jan 2019 1:26am
Thanks so much NewBeginnings! Very much appreciate your kindness and suggestion which I very much agree with you make a great point!
Thanks again for taking time to read and comment🙏
Thanks again for taking time to read and comment🙏
Re. Weightless
31st Jan 2019 7:24pm
This is the 2nd acrostic piece I've been introduced to and both today. This is exquisite!!
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31st Jan 2019 8:07pm
Thanks so much for reading! I love Acrostics
Much appreciation for reading🙏
Much appreciation for reading🙏
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1st Feb 2019 1:20pm